Thx i had alot of fun making this one i loved this show growing up
not the right thread but u can get away with it once. i can try to see what i can come up with, just send me a pm.
I’m trying to work on something for back panel art and decided to try out something that would cover a bunch of different Persona games.
So any thoughts on this template? Is it too stretched out? Is the border in the middle too big?
Any criticism or ideas on how to improve it are welcome. :tup:
And it does contain spoilers for the Persona series of games. So don’t click the spoiler unless you’ve already beaten them or just don’t care.
Personally, it looks too busy in color for my tastes.
I don’t mind the colours, I don’t play the Persona series but I understand that to be fairly integral to the style. I think you should round the corners on the two pictures a little to mimic the corners of the template (obvious at a much smaller radius), and I think something in the middle to tie the two together would help a lot.
eh… not sure how i feel about this one… i think theres too much shit going on, but i pretty much just threw a bunch of shit onto one template, so i guess thats what happens.
http://sphotos.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash3/562387_3874772471577_1346663349_3446768_137299523_n.jpg
It is a bit busy, but that’s how I found the original art unfortunately. I could try to cut away the characters and place them on a different background, but some of the characters themselves are a bit colorful, so it might be difficult.
Thanks for your help, Sorwah. :tup:
Yeah, the Persona series is known for their colors. Just look at my avatar as an example.
Thanks Lord British, I’ll try to round the corners. I think it will look a bit nicer that way.
As for the something in the middle, I might have some ideas. I’ll try it out. Unless you just meant some text or something so it doesn’t look so plain.
Fate/Zero Saber Artwork. I might use it for a future stick unless someone wants dibs and prints it before me.

I would look up for the other masters command seals, so they can flavor each button better.
I specifically chose both Emiya Kiritsuga’s and Emiya Shirou’s seals because they were Saber’s only masters.
lurked for years. Thought I would give a shot at custom stick art. This is TMNT vs zombies with a stronger emphasis on TMNT.

I get the point though; they are both Kiritsugu’s and Shirou’s command seals, both of whom were masters of Saber. If his art had all the masters and servants, I’d agree with having all the command seals. Considering it’s just Saber, Kiritsugu and Irisviel, I’d say he’s on the right track. I’d either get rid of Shirou’s command seal, or include Shirou in the art and make it a Saber stick in general, disregarding Fate/Zero or Fate/stay night.
My new artwork I just finished making. I feel its missing something. Any suggestions? Also remember, I’m not to good at photoshop/GIMP, so don’t be to harsh.
Edit: Okay,this is what it turned into so far. thoughts?

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the empty spot between film rolls looks too empty. probably drop in a good pic that would blend a bit with the color scheme ur going with.
Time to ask a question about art for my TE-S. I have no idea what I’m doing, only that it will either be very flashy or it will be minimalist. Which style do you guys like to see on sticks?
I want it to stand out, but maybe going minimalist is what I need to stand out, you know?
I like the backgrounds added the only other thing i see is that parasol has a faint white outline around her that you might want to clean up or hide with a glow effect
Finished with a rough draft of art for a stick that I’m going to build for a friend. Any suggestions?

The girls on the left have odd shadows around them.
I’ll fix those shadows so they are less more noticeable.
Also fixed the bottom buttons to where they are Miyako sprites now.