I think I got to the end of the 4th chapter on the run I’m watching…
Spoilers
By 4th chapter, I mean Seattle Day 3.
I’m sorry, what the fuck is this pacing?
So Abby shows up at Ellie’s hideout, ambushes Tommy, who’s seen lying down, untied at gun point. Jesse and Ellie rush out the door. Jesse takes a headshot and is dead on the spot as soon as they open the door.
Abby, with one pistol, holds Tommy hostage (again, he’s just lying on the ground and clearly responsive, as he tells Ellie to not come out of her cover and surrender herself.
Ellie does it anyway. Dialogue, then Abby points her gun at Ellie.
Ironically, the previous cutscene had Ellie hold two of Abby’s group at gunpoint. Predictably, one of them managed to get close enough to take Ellie’s gun, though it didn’t really work out for him in the end as Ellie managed to shoot him and overpower his girl to kill her too.
Tommy was in a better position to take Abby down while Ellie shot her though. But I digress, there’s real risk and tension.
What happens?
Cut to a flashback of Abby’s childhood in the middle of all that tension.
Me, the streamer and the chat immediately had “WTF?” reactions. Of all times to try and dump exposition on Abby’s character, that’s not the right one!
This just murders the pacing of the scene, as all tension is immediately sucked out of it.
This criticism isn’t a matter of opinion, even if you like the story, getting a flashback dumped on you on that scene will suck out the tension of the whole situation on the spot. This is a technical problem with the writing. It’s objective, not subjective.
Druckmann is a hack.
I’d honestly rewatch SFV’s story mode than this.