This Gen Bible is very good, however it REALLY needs to be proof read. There’s quite a few grammatical errors, spelling mistakes and the like. For example in the introduction we have:
“library of effective poke” - No plural, no full stop
"characters that combo his Super" - Do you mean can combo?
“Gen’s health” - Gen Is health? Should just be Gens
"practising" - practicing
I know it may not seem like much, but having a guide for a character should be totally correct or else it not only takes away the users interest, but the fun out of reading. I’ll never correct someone’s grammar on the internet but in a guide that is created to be viewed by alot of people I think it’s mandatory to have a perfect guide. What would happen if a BradyGames guide was littered with mistakes and errors?
I’d be happy to help fix it all up and make it readable unless this is already a known problem. The guide is very good (although obviously not finished).
There should also be a section of how to actually hit hands from your normals. Not very many people uses these characters with multiple input moves and I think as an introduction to Gen it would be wise to include the best and easiest way to hit hands from necessary normals. For me, the easiest way to hit hands is:
From st.lp/cr.lp: LP, HP, MP, LP, HP
From s.mp/c.mp: MP, LP, MP, LP, HP
From st.hp: HP, MP, LP, (HP, HP) or (MP, LP)
From Target Combo (HP > MK): HP, HP + MK x 4
From st.mk: MK+LP, HP, MP, LP, HP
My ways never require you to go up the fight stick (LP, MP, HP) because everyone iv e tried teaching has trouble doing it that way, yet I show them the ways I do it and they catch on quickly. Of course feel free to add your own easy ways but I think this section is 100% needed.