c-ryod,
like the concept of the thread but I would hate to be the person int he video being critqued. haha.
it dosent look like anyone is taking the bait of the original post so I’ll give it a shot…
I watched the videos a couple days ago, so some of it is kinda fuzzy. Main thing was that makoto got a lot of parries but didnt try for any resets or even any strait up damage. Same player also used a lot of moves that could lead to more set ups but then would jsut throw out some more pokes instead of doing hayate cancel or rushing in for a karakusa/throw/whatever. Overall looked like the idea was there just didnt have the execution to tie up loose ends. I can have that same problem from time to time. haha. 
With all that being said, everyone is on a different skill level. A couple videos of any one player usally isnt going to tell you a lot. I’d say most of us would notice a lot of our own mistakes if we watched videos of ourselves playing.