I didn’t know that fuckachunkz could be contained in purely written form like that Damned. Now someone needs to make Chibs a Diana AV. =D Saotome gives prem to those that comply.
I’ll comply…
is she in MOTW? i can’t remember… …brain farts waste away my use for unneccesary memory… not saying that Diana isn’t negood… i’m simply stating that all i play from SNK is MOTW-Butt/Rock/Terry =\
She’s not in motw
STILLS
“A.B.A.”

Bay 6
What can I say that hasent been said already? This one is with out doubt, the best still av in show.
“Baiken Ricepaper”

ToyRobotTerror
Creative ideah, but i didnt like the way it turned out. Im not sure how to improve it though, i need to do more research.
“Bizzaro!”

ClouDC
Very creative, and I love the underwater effects. Biggest flaw is difenitly the border, it takes away alot of focus from the sprite.
“Chibi Millia”

Shizuma_15
the colors are nice, but honestly, i dont like the bg at all. It looks too random/messy.
“Dizzy Memories”

givequicheachance
The thing i like about this av the most, is the fact that theres nothing out of place. Everything works. But at the same time, nothing really catches the eye.
“Dizzyness”

<JonnyQuest>
Good ideah, but I think if you used more vibrant colors and put some of the dizzynesss effect infront (not too much) it would have been better.
“Ky Kiske”

InfiniDragon615
really good av, but the bland colors kill it.
“Millia”

Nastradamus
For anyone curious, I made this with all filters. The bg is made out of flowers and copies of her hair.
“My Crew”

Akzidenz
I think this would make a really good sig. But as an av, you had to resize the sprites giving the pixalated look.
“Robo Ky”

-Lalo-
I really love the colors on this one, and the tech lines/words really work with the render. The only thing i dont like are the extra effects that make it seem a bit over done.
“Zato-One”

DarkGiygas
I thought this one had alot of potential, but i dont like the brush work over eddy. It just seems really out of place and throws off the balance of the av.
Well, theres my crappy critiques, and fuck u OC for coming up with my ideah too!:sad: …lol
edit- Slide, I feel you, man. I don’t exactly agree, but who am I to say whether it was right or wrong. You were only tryin to help, good lookin out.
Fuck you, I spent 10 minutes on that av, not one. :arazz:
Also, Jam is reading the request, hence she’s putting her hand up in disgust/frustration/whatever. It’s just hard to use sprites at ALL in Paint. It’s easier to draw the damn thing yourself I guess. You’ve crushed the dreams of a future master av maker Stephen, now the world will never be able to witness my incredibly amazing avs. :sad:
That being said, can I judge next time? The world just isn’t ready for mspaint entries! :wgrin:
And btw, I thought the May Airforce One av was the best one. Such a simple av, yet it looked so good…
I’m not accepting judges for the next one yet, since I’m not sure when that’s gonna be, but make sure that next time I ask for judges, you gimme a holler, jeeeb.
…seriously.
Quiche, if you do end up using the anonymous judging idea for the next comp, I’d love to judge.
go go power scolding?
mspaint is like a bleeding pussy, it’s useless…
Nothing to say about mine?
“Sentinel Upgrade”

You critiqued everyone elses but mine.
That’s just further proof that Irony owns me since I still don’t know what “fuckachunkz”, since most of the times that it’s been used in this thread hasn’t been the way that it was (vaguely) defined on urbandictionary.com.
But, yeah, Chibi is totally Diana.
Tell that to Kandoken, who would easily own us all in an MSpaint contest.
Liar. He critiqued like half of the stills; he didn’t critique mine as well.
Speaking of critique, did NESTS prevent Chibi from critique to Hell yesterday? I am somewhat doubtful that he’s going to do it today, unless he’s one of the few people that (thankfully) doesn’t watch that (dumbass) Super Bowl.
LOL Jeebs. IF you entered that urien av youre rocking, I would have out it top 3 for sure.
Drop that fucking mspaint and bust out photoshop.
I’ve never watched a Super Bowl in my life, I think it’s a horribly stupid event.
I’ll critique the ones I didn’t vote for:
Good idea, decent execution. If I’m not mistaken, the actual art style you went for here doesn’t actual use any color, it’s simply black on rice paper. I can see why you used pink mind you, but limiting it to black might have worked better (I may be horribly wrong on the actual traits of this style mind you, so I apologise if that ends up being the case). Also, not giving her a face at all really did hinder the piece.
In the end it’s more a decent avatar. It’s certainly not ugly, but it doesn’t hold much weight on its own either, there’s little energy to be found in it (relax or exciting).
It’s Slayer’s head on Zappa’s body underwater, with a Cheep-cheep giving us a cameo. It just need a bit more work on it to incorporate the actual notion of being underwater, seeing as the background actually manages to hurt the piece. Cheep-cheep was totally a saving grace though, gave it just the push in the right direction.
That stock of Millia is adorable, but it just doesn’t work with the background at all, not in the slightest. The background itself has to just be done away with really, even though that shot of Millia (to the right of the avatar) might have been put to better use.
Another great environmental shot stuck into an avatar by Quiche. Really there isn’t all that much wrong with it, it’s just simply not all that pleasing to the eye. It needs a subtle touch to just catch your eye, as the sprite of Dizzy is a commonly used one really, and as such it is a bit easy to just glance at it once and then skip over it. You do have a knack for these ‘shots’ though, keep it up.
Multicolored, fidgety background. That’s about it, I can’t even pinpoint exactly what I should be getting out of this avatar, or what you really put into it.
Next.
Poptarts.
Next.
Not all that bad of an idea, definitely needs plenty elbow grease to give it life though. You know, tilt the picture a bit, give it a polaroid ‘shot’ feel to it, that type of thing.
I want one of Baiken in a bikini~
Don’t resize sprites when you don’t need to.
Give it another shot.
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That portrait of Jam is delicious, care to share?
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Never ever, ever, ever, ever, ever use ZOOM LAYER as a way to fill up your background. It automatically negates whatever flow / feel / energy your avatar has simply because of the reptition present.
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The same goes for the grids, that’s almost never worth using.
Ditch the ZOOM LAYER and grids (if you can still alter it) and throw some more into it and show it off again!
I like it Infini, tiny bit of Phil (Bay 6) in there. Good colors and all, but that whole blurry / fading deal you have going on doesn’t work. It would have worked much better without it. Also make the name bigger next time (in another font and a different color).
You had something here buddy, you really did, but the way you tried to work in the background totally killed the piece. All the pieces work fine on their own, but together it’s somewhat of a mess. Rework it somehow, don’t have so much DEATH on screen, crank out a better background, it’ll rock hard in the end.
This is another one of those cases where the sprite doesn’t compliment the background, or vice versa. It’s just the sprite ontop of an interesting background. Make them work with one another, not against each other.
Honestly this does LOOK good in much every aspect, but it’s completely and totally lost on me thanks to the subject matter. Take that how you will.
Nice job. I rather like it. Good use space / transparency. It does feel a bit cluttered though.
It’s stylish (somehow), but that’s as far as it goes. Really not much else to say of it, save I never found O RLY? funny.
The ‘tech’ theme you went with was executed decently, but the avatar is monochromatic (which obviously a bad thing in this case). Microtext barely helps. Those 'puff’s of white on either side of RBKII don’t do much to help either.
As I already mentioned, creative idea, poor execution. Honestly, most of your recent work has been lacking that simplistic charm your stuff used to have, now they’re just SIMPLE period, and as a result, dull.
Looks pretty damn good, good font, control of space, so on and so forth, but that white puff next to him DOES NOT work, what were you thinking?
I’ll get to the animated entries in another day or two.
Got the Jam pic from FightersGeneration.
I still have the psd file, so I’ll see whats up
I see alot of good ava’s, But it seems they all lack something
Valid arguments? Or is this as a sneakupslap?
Werd! That`ll be my new hunt on the 19th! But I got and INO model photo that is off the meter!
I was thinking about the polaroid thing but the sizes for these entries are a new thing for me. Ultra tiny!!!
Sorry, I didn’t critique avs that I didnt have much to say about (either other people nailed it, or I didnt know how to improve it). But I’ll try to do all the critiques when I get a chance.
I wish i coulda made one =/. Oh well.
I loved how there were so many entries featuring ABA.