Here is the Main Yakuza for my up and coming mob comic, I still got to draw out my Triads, Red Mafia(Russian) and the Italian Mafia.
Where the dragon tattoos? Otherwise, looks fun!
If the guy on the left has his right arm cut off, the muscles shouldn’t look like that (should be no muscles on forearm and limp upperarm and deltoids). As it is, it looks like you just erased the forearm.
^believe me, I already took that into consideration. I just decided to go ahead and leave in the muscle structure cuz, A. it’s a comic and B. it’s fantasy, so I left it like that. Thanks for the critique.
Dude in the red looks like he’s gonna be the shit…
If i were you I’d place the red guy in the middle because the two guys on the left kinda fuse in together. I can’t really tell if what’s happening with the two guys arms cause it looks like it fuses in together also. Overall i like everything else, but just watch out for the composition.
Yo, SFMC, what up? I looked at that too. I was afraid that the color would merge together, that’s why I went so light on the dude in the middle so that people would be able to tell them apart. I should of had dude in the middle doing something, that way it would help seperate the two.