i have b+w
but obviously somewhere i went wrong.
i was just trying to do a cartoony style. so i did ALLA the work in ps.
looked ok in b+w, but the more i colored it, the shittier it got.
I think one of the main things that stands out as awkward, is that the figures lack structure and volume. I think that may have come from doing it in photoshop, which probably inhibited your doing a proper underdrawing because you’re not as used to working that way. Also, I think the blood effects are much too busy looking compared to the simplified figures. Hope that helps 