really nice! I do wish that the guy on the left seemed less intent on baring his teeth all the time though.
Beyond that the pages are pretty darned awesome.
thanks for the comments, guys =]
pootnannies- i’m actually doing this for class. i’m on a 3 page/1 week schedule. although i feel a little rushed, i’m really learning a lot. but my storytelling abilities still suck compared to most of my classmates =/
rook- i just noticed that, haha. i’ll probably change his expression on the last page/panel 1.
Tokoyama2000, you are something else.
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8595/jigokuink03sm7.jpg
Page 3
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/4203/jigokuink04qv5.jpg
Page 4
i think the transition between the unzipping and flight is a bit unclear. i’d be great if i can get some feed back on that
thought i’d see about colouring your streetfighter villains pic on first page, think i might of overdone it with the effects though.
Way too blurry.
Tokoyama2000: That comic looks dope. Dude straight up sprouted wings from his backpack. LoL. Cool idea. Plus he has a halo attached to a stick. Good shi’.
BlakMind: That, too, looks cool. Good shi’.
sasmasta- thanks man. glad someone appreciates my designs =]
blakmind- i’m seriously speechless. i think that’s one of the best coloring jobs of my drawings i’ve ever seen.
oh, and i don’t think it’s too blurry, it’s actually a nice and unique effect
thanks man, it was cool working with your lines
I spent the last few hours going from first post to last and I gotta say, Tokoyama, you vastly improved. From your chicks’ faces to the coloring to the amount of detail and so on, all of it improved. Good stuff! You wouldn’t happen to have a zip file of your work on here do you? I wanna keep this stuff!
BlakMind: Best color work I’ve seen on srk yet, although I agree that Balrog is a little too blurry. Please color Toko’s other work!
Tokoyama: Where’s that Guy? :annoy:
It’s not that it is unclear, it assumes the reader knows who the angel dude is even though Jin knows who he is.
So maybe throw in a panel on page 3 after the feathers sprouting, indicating wings poking/shooting out of his rucksack, as long as the reader knows something is actually coming out of it.
Page 4 is fine though and has a big payoff so i wouldn’t touch it.
Very nice linework on these. Are you just working with ink and paper? It looks like your inking right over the pencil?..if that’s true i’m gonna cry…get a nice lightbox ; ; that way you can get the nice clean lines and keep the shweet pencil work. Anywho, cool stuff.
GOD DAMN, that is some awesome shit! Keep up the great work!
need more…
Toko, why do you sometimes draw male characters with such long fingernails? Do they never cut them shits?
no clue =/ never noticed it either, but it’s probably something i should fix. i’ll make sure my next drawing doesn’t have long nails
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9583/likeabeastwithoutloveao6.jpg
class assignment. ‘love triangle’
That orge has a hard-on for the little boy?
Hells yeah
i hope this isn’t a repost. homework assignment based on the old Pop-eye comic strips
the monster’s leg looks great! it’s a good thing she’s telling him not to turn around or else he’d lose an eye!
The crucifixion of Peter
using the same beast from the previous drawing
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/5936/petervm7.jpg
layout stolen by Caravaggio =] duh