Nice! I think you should make the P4A logo smaller and move it so none of it is touching the border. As far as the border goes: I think it would look better if you remove the part that goes around the turbo button area.
Ok guys got parts in today just finish getting every thing in i re did the art since some said the white edges were detracting so here is the finished stick
Okay, I made the logo smaller and moved it. Is this better? And I removed the part around the turbo area, but some will stay if you want it even with the rest of the border. Or I can make it kind of slant away when it gets close to the turbo area? That way none of it is touching that part at all.
in general, and this is a message for everyone, when you commission a design from someone… this is the kind of stuff you say at the beginning.
if you have a preference for a certain color, or set of images you want to use, these are the kind of things that designs are done around, and it could end up wasting hours of someone’s time if you know you want something specific in the beginning and don’t mention it.