The Inevitable SFV Story Rewrite Thread: A SHADOW RECAST! (Act 4 released!)

@HanDred_Fist

There you go. The costume is called “story”.

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And if i remember correctly, the artworks in season 1 were only used as a prequel to the actual story mode. Season 2 should logically follow the same pattern, right?

Nice to see Act 2. Looking forward to further stuff.

Act 4 is well underway. Look for more next update. In the meantime, enjoy acts 1 2 and 3!

In response to the suggestion by @just5moreminutes, here are the ‘patch notes’ for act one. Acts 2 and 3 will follow, along with act 4 in the coming month. Feel free to ask questions about any of the edits to the script.

[details=Spoiler]ACT 1:

SCENE 1:

Improved depiction of Bison’s spectre.

Gave a better impression of Nash’s mental state.

Improved Helen’s characterization.

Improved Nash/Helen interactions.

Nash now leaves with Helen by helicopter.

SCENE 2:

Improved Ryu’s individual characterization.

Included Dhalsim’s wife (already present on that stage).

Updated discussion of the Satsui no Hado.

SCENE 3:

Moved phone messages to another scene.

SCENE 4:

Made Rashid’s interaction with Lei Fen more realistic.

Made Rashid seem more intelligent.

SCENE 5:

Updated FANG interaction with Rashid’s friend.

SCENE 6:

Improved scene transition.

Added phone messages here.

Clarified why Karin & Company are watching the wrestling match.

Improved Karin/Ibuki characterization.

Optimized the wrestling match for flow and sense.

SCENE 7:

Added Bison.

SCENE 8:

Minor improvements to Sean’s presence.

SCENE 9:

No change.

SCENE 10:

Added Nash/Guile relationship subtext.

Explained Chun-Li’s inclusion in the operation.

The military is now already aware of Shadaloo’s existence.

Guile and Chun-Li now act like friends.

SCENE 11:

Made Chun-Li’s fight against Bison more realistic.

Optimized flow of fight sequences.

The Four Kings no longer stand by idly while events unfold.

Improved characterization between Bison and Cammy.

Hyped up the end of Guile’s fight.

SCENE 12:

Included Alex.

Improved exposition.

Removed uncertainty regarding the hackers.

Included Alex’s piece.

Improved characterization of Chun-Li and Guile with respect to Nash.

Improved Rashid’s characterization and presence.

Added Alex vs Rashid fight.

Changed piece distribution.

Improved characterization of Chun Li’s power level.

Added Kanzuki surveillance.[/details]

Act 2 notes as promised:

[details=Spoiler]SCENE 1:

Improved Necalli interactions.

Improved Rashid characterization.

Clarified motivations and descriptions of Juri and Helen.

SCENE 2:

Added Kanzuki surveillance.

SCENE 3:

Strengthened story thematic and Ryu characterization.

SCENE 4:

Reworked Decapre’s presence and character interactions. Added more clear character motivations.

Fixed R.Mika and Ibuki presentation.

Fixed März character presentation.

SCENE 5:

Changed Alex dialogue to reflect earlier changes in Act 1.

Fixed Karin characterization.

Patched Zangief flow issues.[/details]

Act 3 notes. Act 4 should be posted later today or tomorrow depending:

[details=Spoiler]ACT 3:

SCENE 1:

Minor flow corrections.

SCENE 2:

Moved the Alex New York scene to here.

Added Balrog and Ed.

Improved Dhalsim’s interactions and dialog flow.

SCENE 3:

Improved Laura’s motivation and interactions with Ken.

SCENE 4:

Removed Balrog and Ed.

Improved flow for Zangief losing piece.

SCENE 5:

Moved from SCENE 2 to here.

SCENE 6:

Improved Cammy’s choices and decision-making.

Improved interactions between Cammy and Juri.

Improved interactions between Cammy and Chun-Li.

SCENE 7:

Added new scene of Karin, Ibuki and Mika infiltrating the Shadaloo base.

Clarified infiltration method and experience.

SCENE 8:

Increased the feeling of infiltrating the base.

SCENE 9:

Improved dialogue to suit Rashid’s character.

SCENE 10:

Added scene to more clearly indicate Nash’s mental state.

SCENE 11:

Minor improvements to Ibuki and Mika’s dialog.

Added Santamu and her piece.

SCENE 12:

Removed Dhalsim.

SCENE 13:

Improved interaction between Chun-Li and Lei Fen.

SCENE 14:

Improved scene flow.

Minor improvements to Karin and Chun-Li’s dialog.

Improved FANG & Bison characterization.

Removed US Air Force segment.

Improved Necalli’s characterization and involvement.

Added Chun-Li to the Bison & Necalli segment.
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