In response to the suggestion by @just5moreminutes, here are the ‘patch notes’ for act one. Acts 2 and 3 will follow, along with act 4 in the coming month. Feel free to ask questions about any of the edits to the script.
[details=Spoiler]ACT 1:
SCENE 1:
Improved depiction of Bison’s spectre.
Gave a better impression of Nash’s mental state.
Improved Helen’s characterization.
Improved Nash/Helen interactions.
Nash now leaves with Helen by helicopter.
SCENE 2:
Improved Ryu’s individual characterization.
Included Dhalsim’s wife (already present on that stage).
Updated discussion of the Satsui no Hado.
SCENE 3:
Moved phone messages to another scene.
SCENE 4:
Made Rashid’s interaction with Lei Fen more realistic.
Made Rashid seem more intelligent.
SCENE 5:
Updated FANG interaction with Rashid’s friend.
SCENE 6:
Improved scene transition.
Added phone messages here.
Clarified why Karin & Company are watching the wrestling match.
Improved Karin/Ibuki characterization.
Optimized the wrestling match for flow and sense.
SCENE 7:
Added Bison.
SCENE 8:
Minor improvements to Sean’s presence.
SCENE 9:
No change.
SCENE 10:
Added Nash/Guile relationship subtext.
Explained Chun-Li’s inclusion in the operation.
The military is now already aware of Shadaloo’s existence.
Guile and Chun-Li now act like friends.
SCENE 11:
Made Chun-Li’s fight against Bison more realistic.
Optimized flow of fight sequences.
The Four Kings no longer stand by idly while events unfold.
Improved characterization between Bison and Cammy.
Hyped up the end of Guile’s fight.
SCENE 12:
Included Alex.
Improved exposition.
Removed uncertainty regarding the hackers.
Included Alex’s piece.
Improved characterization of Chun-Li and Guile with respect to Nash.
Improved Rashid’s characterization and presence.
Added Alex vs Rashid fight.
Changed piece distribution.
Improved characterization of Chun Li’s power level.
Added Kanzuki surveillance.[/details]