I’m back again this time.
Here’s some Street Fighter Fanart:
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee324/Sindorix/Nanase.png
They look alright, if you explored this particular style of form illustration some more, you can get something going…
What I’m saying is that:
-your lines are loose, but it’s like it wasn’t intentional. If you had made it clear you deliberately drew your lines loose by making it subtly chaotic, you can establish your own style and people will dig it.
-your choice of colours aren’t particularly vibrant or contrasting. Instead they all seem to sit at about the same tone. You can buff up the colours by having the shadows be a bit darker, and the highlights a bit brighter if you want your work to really pop.
THank you for the feedback, AOS.
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee324/Sindorix/street_fighter_ex_girls_by_tentagami-d3dlc9a.jpg
You may want to reconsider the amount of detail you put into noses (usually less is more when it comes to the nose, especially for women) but other than that your work is great, very nice coloring.
Agreed on the nose. Less detail is usually better; you can usually draw the nostrils without the curves next to them, and just shade in the proportions.
Other than that, I’m seeing potential here. You did a good job cleaning up the line work in your latest picture, and the color is progressively getting better.