Myria from Breath of Fire 3

This sketch came about as a result of reading through a thread about MVC3 end-boss wishlists, and I thought Myria from BOF3 would be some awesome nostalgia. It’s pretty rough looking because I just went at it as a sketch using ballpoint pen, then went over the outline with a sharpie pen and sharpie ultra fine point marker. What I really want is to develop more of a stylization in my drawings, but I don’t think this turned out too much so. I couldn’t go back and fine tune with an eraser, but managed to make some minor improvements by means of thickening lines in the right areas. The arm bothers me a little, it looks a little wonky but I was going for perspective. I’m totally looking for some constructive criticism here, so please have at it.

http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/3984/myriaresize.jpg

I love this line art. Some points where you shaded the character( arms, breast, face, hair) really gave life. a WIP?