My manga B)

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Hey guys,
Ive been doing this comic since January now. And i reckon SRK Forums would be a good place to show it off. I’ve been on here for quite a while now and i just haven’t thought about advertising here lol

It’s currently a webcomic hosted by smackjeeves and there are 11 pages uploaded so far including a colour page spread.

The story is about a young man who finds a legendary lottery ticket and the event is only held every 20 years. Whoever wins basically becomes so filthy rich they can have enough power to influence the whole country. He meets a mysterious girl and decides to involve herself in his life for some reason…

yeah this is the worst synopsis I could ever give but hey… read the comic and see what you think.

Anyway I hope you guys like it.

PS: I aint sure this is the right section to put this in. If it isnt can someone move it to the correct section please? :smiley:

Peace!

->go to ‘begin reading’ lol

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it’s good. Suggestion though- you put a bit too much in each word bubble. This is common among american comics, but usally in manga, theres a frame for every couple bubbles, and a bubble for every major part of the comic. This helps break up and make comprehensible the points you are trying to make, as well as entertain your readers with something to look at. Other than that I believe its ready for a submission as a one shot to tokyopop. Get some money for your hobby!

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From a quick reading that you may have more of the rings of hell involved? but nice!

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Thanks guys I appreciate it.
What do you mean by the rings of hell? lol

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“Whaaa? Mum got you a DSP?”

Lol its pretty good man, I like it :tup:

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I’m liking it. I like your style of art and think you pull it off well. Let’s see where this goes.

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Thanks for all the nice comments guys :slight_smile: