More dudley critique?

Hey guys! You might have seen me around the forums I am back with another vid asking for tips on how to better my dudley play. All comments are welcome Trust me I can take it! https://youtube.com/watch?v=WAxj5dpFy4Y&list=UUqzvIGTtQfJaucJuGSJUGIA
Feel free to comment on the video or in the forums I will be reading both and as always thank you! I am getting better not just by myself but with the help of you guys!