Millia.. colored

first time coloring my drawing inside photohoshop… what do u guys think?

http://www.badmoon.defcrab.com/art/Millia.jpg

The coloring is not bad at all,though she appears a bit shiny, or like she’s translucent. I’d try to get a sense of how light hits skin, and then emulate it for the best results. Also, be sure to get in all of the corners and crevices, so that the color just dosent stop. Be sure to be consistent. For a first attempt this is great. Very nice, I assume you’ll only progress with practice.

Keep up the good work.

That’s actually really, really good. Some might argue that there are a lot of proportion problems. But I think that’s what make this pic stands out (it might not be deliberate, but really it’s what makes the pic great). You have quite a distinctive style there. Plus that hair twirling on her left leg is a nice touch.

thanks for the critique guys. i’d appreciate it if there was more from other people too.

and yeah… I’ll prolly post more of stuff here from now on.

I like it. My only issue is the mouth – a little too low on the face for my taste. Got a great style.

Good work. My critique is similar to hyperblade’s.

A darker background would fix the “translucency” problem. Red and green, or a gradient to a darker color would provide contrast.

I can’t determine the light source. The shoes and hair have a light source coming from the front, the skin has a light source from the bottom right, the clothes have a light source from overhead, while the gloves have a light source from all around except the front.

And, like what Mr. Twelve says, its the proportions that make the style stand out. Personally, I like it.

yeah i concur with what everyone said so far. Get some more value gradation in there and this will be nice. Love the kt av btw. haha.

thanks again everyone. Not sure if i can point out what the proportion problems are though. but i appreciate all the comments.

sfmc: yeah dude… kt is smokin…