um see how you say it’s your artistic style? its a lazy defense. You’re saying your style or interpretation is that her hair and costume don’t turn invisible? so you just decide to be lazy and call it style? nice. the reason i’m being so “harsh” is because you asked for criticism. i gave you some and you get defensive. Stop acting like you have the ego of a pro artist, and just listen to the advice you’re given and show your progress. I mean you painted a picture from a promo poster for a movie…poorly. what are you expecting? us to be oooo and ahhhhh? sorry. keep at it, because art is amazing, but don’t be so superior! it seems like everything someone commented on you had an excuse…sorry “reason” instead of taking the advice. your mind was already made up…so why ask for advice.
oh and how to paint invisible? how about googling “sue storm” or “invisible woman” and see the way hundreds of artists do it.
I know a lot about what i’m talking about…i’m not just trying to be a dick. I am in fact trying to help. Maybe we just don’t see eye to eye on style. here’s my page so you know i take art seriously www.jayogden.com
GOD DAMN IT!
I hadn’t even noticed your “INSPIRED” metal gear. DUDE you flipped the image and colored the silhouettes. That just stolen. It’s an insult to real artists! ANYONE can do that. Don’t call it an artistic process.
If yo think i’m being mean…try passing this off in a real art forum like penny arcade, or concept art! You’ll be eaten alive 10x worse than this! If you want to be an artist you need to learn basics. Form, composition, anatomy, shading, light, color theory. You know none of the basics but talk like you could make a living doing what you’re doing.
I’m lazy in my first attempt at painting anything.
Right again! I did ask for constructive criticism and feedback. I didn’t get defensive until you came in here like “so you’re gonna shit on the advice of good artists…” I don’t know about you, but I didn’t shit on anything. If I recall correctly, you’ll find that every time I address anyone’s feedback, I say thank you, because I appreciate it greatly. Maybe you need your eyes checked or some shit. And who said I wasn’t going to take advice? I asked for it, asshole. I was just justifying all the things that you picked apart in your first post and you got all pissy after that. Why should I have to defend myself in my own art thread?
Nobody said shit about an ego til you flashed your credentials as an “artist” with a “portfolio” on his website then called another person’s work “poor.” And frankly I dont give a fuck what artfags like you think. I didn’t paint what I painted to gain any fucking cred. I’ve got my priorities straight… have you?
Only sorry excuse I see is all the shit you’re writing in here like it’s got some sort of point. If I wasn’t open to advice I wouldn’t have asked for it.
My bad, simulating transparency with opaque paint on a canvas and three shitty brushes was a little too hard for my simple mind. Um, by the way, did you even do that search yourself? Cause the first thing I saw was cartoon titties and bush. Sorry but Im only into porn with real people, not cartoons :tup: 10 pages into both searches and well, I wasn’t exactly hit with a barrage of invisibility, transparency, OR translucency. I’m disappointed :sad:
YO if you see that Hideo Kojima fucker… tell him IM LOOKIN FOR HIM. Im gonna BEAT HIS ASS for stealing MY characters. Man, this… this… is just way too much for me to handle :sad:
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Aight, fuck it. This is gonna be hard to say… after all these years and all this money I’ve made off of my hundreds of paintings… You caught me! :amazed: I’m nothing but a fraud. A thief. I google search images and nab shit from the first page, then steal it all and pass it off as my own, because I’m just that smart and nobody will ever know! Theres no way I painted that. Its all a lie. MY ART IS A LIE! Now everyone just… just get out of here because I can’t… I can’t live with myself anymore now that the great Sir Jay Ogden AKA Rabid Wombat exposed my master plan to do paintings in my house for fun! Ohhhh no, what will I doooooooo :amazed: :sad:
Psst… by the way. I’m totally out to get alllll the REAL artists. Watch out! Imma getcha! :looney:
You ever seen an artist do a portrait painting from a photograph? God jesus fuck… what a concept. Why didnt I think of that? You have to use the wheel if you want to build a car.
Okay, you can stay on your REAL art forums and jack off to the semantics of “What is Art?” while I stay on this fake one. Get the fuck out of my thread and go stroke your fuckin Dali moustache in a Starbucks, faggot.
2 of your finger drawings look very unrealistic to me. The one in the top center looks like its missing alot of skin in between the most of the fingers, themselves. Not only that, but the overall hand gesture looks like it needs some retouching before I can actually believe its a human hand. The 3 fingers that are pointing up all look a little “too straight” for realism.
I don’t know how to explain that last part, but when you’re drawing hands, its usually a good idea to NOT make them so straight. It takes away some of the life and complexity from them and they’ll end up looking artificial.
The hand in the bottom right corner just looks disfigured all around. I’m sure this one is obvious.
When your outlines are too thick, its hard for my eyes to be convinced that this guy’s face has any form to it. I see that you applied some values, but you need a shit load more. If you’re trying to go for the realisitic look, and I can count only 3 different tones in that potrait, that’s bad news.
And looking at the thick, heavy outlining you have there, the entire potrait looks flat, still.
To me, the outlines and the little amount of values you applied aren’t working well with each other. You need to blend more.
Wow you’re gonna try to bash me? Thank you sir…you have made my night. I see you got your friends who also don’t know shit to come knock me. It’s cool you don’t have to like my art, but at least i’m not a joke like you.
