Humpski's Home Made Fight Scenes (Please Critique!)

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Hey all.

I thought maybe you guys would enjoy these fight scenes that I’ve made over the past few years. They are certainly not hollywood quality, but I tried my best.

I’m looking for lots of constructive criticism if you guys care to take the time and comment here or on youtube. I can use any advice you guys give to make my future projects better.

Thanks!

The Master Disaster:
Never sleep with your Sensei’s daughter
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The Brawl:
My real life Father beats my friends and I to a bloody pulp. Child abuse!
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Snow Angel Square Off:
Don’t intrude on a man’s snow angel patch.
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The Cursed Woods:
Zombies, Martial Arts, Gangsters, Hillbillies! Oh My!
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The Nudy Police:
This one is just weird…
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The Battle:
Two guys battling in the woods for seemingly no reason.
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The Battle Part II:
Losing guy from Part 1 heals his wounds and comes back for revenge.
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The Showdown:
This one isn’t very good. I only post it because I do a crappy imitation of K’s “Chain Drive” Desperation Move that’s kind of amusing.
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These two are a bit different. They aren’t full on fight scenes, but they still contain some of our better fight scenes in them. They are a parody of the Super Sentai types shows. Kamen Rider specifically.

Gei Ridah:
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Gei Ridah Part II:
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And here’s a bonus video. A fake movie trailer that in my opinion is some of our better work technically speaking.

The Gauntlet:
Fake movie trailer about a super power armored glove.
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Thanks for watching all, assuming you chose to do so. I look forward to hearing what you guys thought! We’ve got lots of other videos on our channel if you are interested.

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Very cool.
I can’t do camera work like that. :sad:

You guys do martial arts?

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I do. Yeah. (I’m the one wearing a leather jacket in most of those videos.) So does my Dad but he’s only in one of those videos.

Nobody else does though so I have to coach them.

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No one has any advice on how to improve my future works?
Should I even do future works? Or is my stuff in fact pretty lame?

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I really thought at least a couple people would be amused by these… guess not.

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lol i loved most of those man. looks like you guys had alot of fun making them too!

lol@your dad kicking the bucket

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Hey, thanks!

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Was very entertaining really liked them all and especially the trailor for the Gauntlet I give it all two thumbs up.

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cool…kudos…

really like the angles on a lot of the kicks…especially in that zombie redneck one…

good job

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Very cool. Me and my friend always use do make up martial arts scenes when we sere young. That was about 25 years ago so we had no video camera. I would suggest watching some professionally made movies and try to imitate some of the techniques. More speed would make it more realistic.

This is a very good start and I enjoyed all. Keep it up and this could become a career for you as a director.

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Haven’t checked on this thread in a while.

Thanks guys!
I haven’t actually done one of these since my brother smashed me in the face by accident. Lotta blood…