i think i’ll get more critical art/technique advice here…
Welcome to the boards guy! You’re from snk-cap right? Yeah it’s kind of dead over there. I tried to unite the two boards, but unfortunately it didn’t work out. Go grab yourself an avatar and have a good time here.
I think your pic looks good. Only thing I would do if I were you would be to shrink the font in the bg. At first glance my eye traveled to that one section. Either that or paint over the words a bit more. Overall good stuff.
Very nice.
welcome to SRK, hope to see more of your work in the future!
hey SFMC! man you dont know how much i respect you and your work,… i hope to learn stuff from you in the future:D
hmm, i’l try to tweak it a bit more…
actually there are still some minor stuff which i need to fix…
-colar embroidery shadows/depth
-freckles
-sweater tweaking
-eyes could be Blue instead of Red
PS - i was reading your tuts, and i still can’t get the coloring “right”, as you can see, it all seems so “pasty” imo need to get the contrast and “highlights” tweaked some more
nice pic man. Glad to have you join us.
I would make the inside of the coat darker and the lines on the sweater could go. They sorta distract from the pattern.
Welcome!
I like the first pic. Reminds me alot of Falcoon’s work. This one’s a bit awkward though. Her arms and legs are really long. The elongated proportions are a bit distracting.
They’re supposed to be elongated and long, it’s Duo Lon ;p.
Hey man, You made the leap. Welcome aboard. Liking the textures on that first pic btw
You joining the project? I wouldn’t know.
what;'s that?
@Kandoken - hehe, Her? lol,
and oh i tried to be accurate to the original sprite, that’s why the proportions are severly odd. look at his qcb+K
welcome to the boards. the chick ash is hot!
http://www.shoryuken.com/forums/showthread.php?t=108286
Yeah. Similar thread on S-C, I’m in charge of that one too. ^_~
^Nice. LOL, my bad about the last crit. I just googled Duo Lon just now and seen the concept for the first time. Scratch that one.
hrmm… i guess i’ll bump this
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/640/jannepink6mo.png
so,… how’s my coloring in here? I went onto coloring the lineart with a single layer… kinda works i guess
Ha, I have no idea who that is, but I like it a lot.
It’s uber cute.
WARNING: Modem hazard.
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/2849/yagami119fx.th.png
disregard the flames, my goal here was to practice “illumation”, refelctive stuff and of course coloring