Just a little mini comic of two of my favourite characters from the Alpha Series slugging it out in good ol’ Metro City!
Hope you guys like it?! :karate:
Just a little mini comic of two of my favourite characters from the Alpha Series slugging it out in good ol’ Metro City!
Hope you guys like it?! :karate:
Here’s the second page, hope it ain’t boring you guys to much?!
:party: It all kicks off now! Couldn’t wait to get to this bit! HA!
Hope you lot enjoy looking at this shit as much as I did drawing it!
Here’s another page, don’t worry only one more to go! :devil:
Last one! Thought I’d throw in a couple of old Final Fight characters into the mix!
This look really cool but it’s kinda hard to read considering it’s so… uh mini.
It’d be a drag for you but if you want to you should repost these a little larger so we can actually see what’s going on.
I agree it needs to be bigger. The line and ink work looks solid. The comic looks good but I think there needs to be more air between the panels. It is cool to break the panels sometimes, but if it is done to many times it loses its effect. Add some more air or block in some areas with panels and it will be easier to read. Other than that its pretty good. Keep up the good work.
The art looks great, although, the only thing I would suggest is to make it bigger , and space out your panels a bit like shadow [hb] suggested.
Thanks for feedback guys, I didn’t realise it was gonna come out as small as that but will get that sorted asap. I’ve got a few rough sketches that I thought I’ll throw in when I get the comic work enlarged!
ps - When I get them enlarged I was thinking of putting it in the Street fighter comic thread so more people can have a look but don’t wanna come across as a cheeky bastard, HA! What do ya think?!
cosign on the “too small” thing. i wanna see this shit!