Good stuff. Deflate the cheeks. the chin is too big and flat. his face should form a v from his zygomatic bone down to his cheek. round out his jaw line. he’s too built right now, especially his neck, too thick. his collar bone is too pronounced.His chest doesn’t pop out that much.Maybe turn down the occlusion pass
Looks great, one quick question though, are you going for realism or how it portray in the game. It looks great, but if you want to follow like the game, possibly look into Appleseed’s style, so you can merge the anime and 3d more cohesively? Looks good, the face I think is the only part everyone, and myself included are having trouble associating, because its so far from the source material, aka Anime Inspired Design.