The Path

Oh I’m not done with story!

I’m editing like CRAZY. Chapters 20-23. Man chapter 20 sucked, but the editing has made it better (you’ll see). I haven’t given up yet. It is just ole Fisty is looking for a stable home.

Question:
=Who eliminates Ken in the first SF tournament?
=Dan getting kicked out of Gouken’s school…I’m wondering how to tackle that one.

I’ve also just started writing a new book…but this time that novel will stay in the lab until it is finished. But finish I have to finish the path. I will not give up on this! I’ve worked on it for too long!

Wow. I haven’t had internet in my place of residence for a whole year! Being a low class Saiya-jin sure is the life.

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Wiki is my friend. Ken was never even in the first SF tournament.

Good to see ya back FOF.:tup:

IMHO…Even if Ken wasn’t in the first SF tourney its still ok, just start from the all american tourney in the states instead…where Ken has some losses at first but then turns his game around and starts winning and eventually defeating the reigning champ (an unknown fighter…a guy who didn’t like Ken when they were growing up, who Ken beat a couple times embarrassing him etc…)

About Dan, you can make this a side chapter that continues right after Dan seeing his father die at the hands of Sagat he seeks out the legendary master Gouken for training. But he doesn’t know that Gouken sees the fight between Sagat and Go Hibiki as well but from afar off from the crowd and the fighting ring, then like 5 years into his training Gouken tells Dan he knows the real reason why he seeks training from him and why his mind, body and spirit will never become as one (dan’s attitude, his revenge for sagat etc…) and eventually dismisses him from the dojo.

Wow…cannot believe they announced SF IV.

I’m still editing!

He was until the release of the SF2AM and the Zero series; he may very well had been eliminated by Ryu back then.

About Dan, I released the true account of his expulsion on Warriors Fate if you want some input. He seemed quite young when it occurred, so I don’t know how old you’d want to make him for your story.

Could you post the account of what happened, there’s like 100+ pages over there in the warriors fate thread and i tried going thru most of it but my head started hurting from all the reading…lol

Oh alright, just this once. In the future, ask and I can help you find things fairly quickly using kind of like the plot guide’s “pgv” method on the SRK search engine.

Dan from SFZ

Original account from SF2 Himitsu Hyakka

During the time Sagat’s one eye was plundered, his father died in the midst of the bout. In order to defeat his father’s foe, Dan would walk the fighting path. However, with Sagat defeated by a nameless fighting stylist his figure had disappeared.
For the sake of chasing after vengeance Dan, began as a student before Gouken. Dan’s fighting ability, was steadily becoming stronger…
“Dan!, for what sake do you struggle!?” Gouken, asked of Dan. For Gouken, in the midst of training within Dan’s fist, he saw hatred. Dan, could not respond. As Dan’s fist was that Gouken had taught, a righteous fist it had not become.
"Dan!, depart from before me, …furthermore, abandon your fist!"
At Gouken’s words, Dan shedded tears. Dan was excommunicated.
However, Dan for the sake of revenge could not throw away his fist. From that day Dan’s self-taught-style training began.

Official Story from Gamest SFZ and AASFZ

Before Gouken’s eye, seemingly with that brow touching the floor, 1 person a young man was squatting down.
From where had he heard of it, a lonely mountain recess where his own techniques would thus be polished with the family constitution before Gouken, as a young man he requested to be taught. One day Gouken saw through him. Within this young man, a matter of concealing a rare fighting ability…
"Ahem Dan, what is it that you desire of your fist?"
At those words of Gouken the young man quietly raising his head, coldly answered.
"Just, only strength!"
Gouken had interest in Dan’s talent, from being ushered as a student, how many months and days had elapsed. Gouken’s suspicion penetrating, while Dan’s talent was blossoming, something, was funny. Calling forth a fist that which is always tagging along, especially like a blazing up of malice desires, like something spurring on impatience… The heart of Gouken’s aiming fist, Dan’s fist came to be losing it. “I perhaps was mistaken…” Gouken determined something in his eye, such that he would murmur.

Within jet black darkness, only a candle light flickered faintly in the dojo, beginning to seemingly encounter the day, motionlessly 2 people’s figures sat facing each other.
“Dan!, with what are you being burdened?” Seeing Dan with his head looking away from him in silence, Gouken slowly arose.
“Then your fist, don’t only close it up.” Having silently approached him, placing him up on his knee aiming Dan’s fist at a released thrust.
His body stiffened Dan slowly opened his eye and, from that thrust Dan’s fist had just stopped. Ever as a master, having the lessons by his own hand for the student’s fist broken and such, Gouken could not seem to expect any more.
“Dan!, depart from before me…furthermore, abandon your fist!” Declaring such that his back would face him, as Gouken shedding tears left Dan behind, he had gone back into the dojo.
That night Dan left from Gouken’s side. With him seemingly smeared with hatred and, he could not for reason abandon his fist…that’s right, as long as revenge to carry out on that man!

Thanks V10. :tup:

Yea i should have asked you what page it was on, but i wasn’t sure if you remembered or not by there’s so many pages in the thread.

S’alright AKUMA2000. No problem.:bgrin:

UPDATE
Chapters 1 through 23. Smashed together and revised (again). It is a Microsoft Word document.
A notepad version of the same.

And I replaced all the chapters in this thread with their final versions. Hooray!

Now for the last two chapters! Almost completed, but don’t plan the party yet.

Good job FoF. :tup:

Yes. nice job man. I’m dying for the last chapters bro…you gotta put em’ up soon. I’m looking forward to them.

Chapters 24 and 25 should be up in about a month. Or sooner. Or later. I’m like 25% done with them.

cool. :tup:

Of course I’m still working on it. Inspiration is coming slow…but steady.

FOF, about time you get finished the PS3 and Xbox360 versions of SFIV will be here…LOL j/k :rofl::rofl::rofl:

if he doesn’t finish it by the end of this year, i’m gonna steal the work, finish it myself, and publish it.

^ :rofl::rofl::rofl:

Gentlemen,

It’s been a while. Like 8 years…Glad to see some of you old geezers are still at it!!! I see that my Mega Man X story is gone…I may do a re-write because I have no idea where the original is. Well, actually, it’s probably in a landfill somewhere because of Hurricane Katrina. Akuma2000, Fists of Fury glad to see you guys especially. I’ll be back.

Peace,

tsj76

Oh man

LOL.

I’ve got the last two chapters about 80% done now. And I am editing the whole manuscript again (jesus I use so many fucking commas) and I’m on chapter 15 of that.

So I am working!

I AM A SLOW ASSHOLE

Wow welcome back tsj76! Wondered where you had gone to.

ps: Y’all need to get at me on AIM: Fisty5000
And myspace: www.myspace.com/Fisty5000