GOOD JOB…Keep going Fists Of Fury, i’m salivatating for chapter 3:p 
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when can we expect chp 3 ???
thanks.
Once I get a good momentum going, you can expect chapters every week.
Chapter 3 should be ready by…next Friday. (not this friday, the one after)
Well, after reading this, it actually hurts to know that they were once so close, and later on, like Cain and Able, one brother kills the other. The irony, but I guess that was acceptable as it was the way of the warrior for them.
Anyway, this story is shaping up to be great, and I love the fact that it tells a story that really never been told. I would love to critique it somehow, but this chapter was great, as well as the first.
I did find humerous though the part where Goutetsu was drinking his teeth:D
Ya ya, I know it was a typo (I hope) but just like the ‘shit’ Kyo recived from his girlfriend in Still Burning, I found this funny 
Anyhow, I wish next friday would come soon, really wanna read the next chapter.
Next friday…??..
I’m just gonna have to keep my fanfiction sanity until then:lol:
it depends on how much free time I have. Lately I’ve been wrapped up in some things (like my new girlfriend:D), but if I have more extra time it’ll be done sooner.
Hehe…it does say “teeth”…:lol:sweat:…goes back…not anymore:p
now…I know how Cain is…but whos Able? Long lost brother perhaps?
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I would just say:
“Two “bodies” are better than one”
anyways… It was a great chapter!! Expecting for the next chapter… However, like you said… next Friday…
So… I hope this command will work:
GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP BY TOMORROROW!
But afterall, you are going to spend some time with your girlfriend.
Then… Well, I hope you have good time with your gf…
But please, please, please, please, do not forget this fan fiction…
Your GF? Thats no excuse!!! GET TO WORK!!! You guys can have quality time later. I hope she isn’t affecting your SF skillz, I don’t want to own you to badly next time we meet:p
If “Afaik” is a joke, it’s funny. If not, I read a little too much into it and disregard that. But anyway, great chapter. Now, chapter 3, quickly. And you don’t have any excuses, you’re only working on one fan fic. :lol: :lol: :lol: {Like you don’t have a life outside the computer.} :lol:
Hey, your woman always comes first…err let me rephrase that:lol:…she’s has priority over everything else.
Able was Cain’s younger brother (if not mistaken)…Cain killed Able because he was jealous that God accepted his brother’s offering and not his.
I’m liking this fic. Is Afaik an original characer? ANyway, I can wait a week. Keep it up.
Nah, you won’t. I still practice…come on now…I don’t spend that much time with her…
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I know that…but I thought the spelling was Abel…it was a joke…nevermind:lol:
Yeah, we’d better leave this guy alone. We don’t want his girlfriend to c.fp all of us because we’re taking up all his time.
U dont know her, she’d SHUN GOKU SATSU all of us!!! She really scares me sometimes…
Lmaooooo:lol:, i just noticed that…guess the joke’s on me :o
falls to floor laughing
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So what say guys? Should we just give him his five stars now, or wait until chapter 10?
you guys should wait.
Who knows, the fic might downward spiral into complete and utter trash by Chapter 10…don’t want to mis-vote:p :lol:
How many sentences have you written so far for chp 3 ??:lol:
like a paragraph…:lol:
But I’m working on it as we speak:D