The Path

Chapter XV: El Hroe del da

Gouki gingerly packed several rolled up scrolls into his bag, laying them one on top of another. He had decided after all to only copy the ones he wanted and take those, leaving the precious originals behind as a measure of precaution and out of respect for their authors.

Two days had passed since Gen and Master Fei departed for China, Gouken left the night he finished his fight. Goutetsu left for the mountains to further train himself; now that he no longer had students to look after he resumed his wandering ways. This only left Gouki and Afaik; and Afaik herself spent most of her days in town playing mah jong and chess with her housewife friends.

The shadow of candlelight danced on the walls of the old study, as Gouki quickly stuffed what he needed into his worn bag. The dusty floor hadn?t been swept in years and the cobwebs hung like curtains and drapes?.yet the room gave Gouki a sense of familiarity. Now he was leaving that, unsure if he would ever return. Gouki sighed as he reached over and extinguished a candle in between his thumb and index finger. The ghostly trail of smoke silently dispersed into the stately air with a soft hiss. He picked up his bag and slung it over his shoulder lazily, quietly finishing off the rest of the candles. Once the last flame flickered and died, Gouki ambled out of the room, his hands shoved in his pockets and his face somber.

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?HELP! I?VE BEEN ROBBED!! SOMEONE!!?

A loud shriek echoed through the country marketplace as Gouken?s ears perked. His mouth was stuffed with food as he sat at a local outdoor diner. It was a busy day, the sun shining and many people yelling and children running around playing. Gouken listened closer, but heard no more. After a minute he went back to his noodles.

?SOMEBODY HELP???

The voice tore through the ruckus of the marketplace again, Gouken immediately dropped his dish and sped off in the direction, not missing a beat as he tossed the proper amount towards the waitress and winked at her smiling face.

Gouken had walked all night, keeping a nice pace to not tire him out but at the same to actually get somewhere. He figured he had at least traveled 30 miles from Goutetsu?s grounds, but he didn?t care enough to ask anyone. Gouken?s main concern was just going somewhere, anywhere. As he ran his loose tan gi flapped in the brisk breeze, kicking up a cloud of thin dust that made his bare feet even dirtier. The calls began to grow closer, and before he knew it he was standing in front of the woman making them.

?M?am?? Is something the matter??? Gouken meekly inquired.

The woman in front of him was young and beautiful, but her drab kimono and haggard hair suggested a humble lifestyle. She stood in front of Gouken slightly annoyed that he would ask such a question, as she had been screaming for help at the top of her lungs for the past 10 minutes.

?Some common thug has just stolen all of my money.? She stated.

??how can I help?? Gouken sensed he?d be dealing with this woman for the rest of the day.

?I want you to get my money back. Follow me around, when I seem him I?ll point him out to you. Please?.I needed that money?sniff?

Gouken shrugged and followed her.

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The orange afternoon sky was at its last stand, holding on just a little longer before night would overthrow it. Gouken and the woman had walked along for hours now, with no sign of the thief. As they approached a lonely road, the woman grabbed Gouken and pulled him close.

?There he is.? She hissed.

?Him?? Gouken pointed out in the distance. ?He looks like a monk?are you sure he?s the one??

?He?s the one! You know how corrupt monks are these days?.you better watch out.?

?He should not be a problem. Stay here, I?ll be back.? Gouken?s eyes suddenly turned surprisingly serious as he began to briskly walk forward.

?Hey you!!? Gouken shouted.

?Hrm?? The figure turned around slowly, a lazy daze in his eyes. He was a monk, a shining bald head with bushy eyebrows, a beak nose and a slender face. He didn?t look a day over 19, his garment loose robes with pants that stopped at his upper ankle and a shirt that stopped at his elbow. He stared at Gouken confused, a bag slung over his right shoulder. Out of the corner of his eye he saw the woman, pointing at Gouken while his back was turned.

?You!? The stranger shouted.

?Me what?! Give this kind woman back her money!?

?ME?! You?re the thief!!?

?WHAT?! How dare you! You lying thug! Don?t make me have to use force!? Gouken rolled up his sleeves.

?Force! You couldn?t do anything with those skinny arms! Now listen, you give this woman back her money and I won?t pound you into the ground.?

?So that?s how you want it huh?!?

?I?ll have to beat some sense into you!!?

?THAT?S IT!!!? Both shouted simultaneously as they sprang into fighting stances, their eyes locked upon one another.

?HAH!? The stranger bolted forward with a palm strike, Gouken easily dodged the attack and attempted to land a right hook. The stranger caught Gouken?s arm, and threw him over-the-shoulder to the dusty ground.

?Rookie. You overextended yourself. Your own momentum has just been used against you.? Gouken shot back up into a jumping roundhouse. The attack was blocked and countered with a hammerfist to the side of Gouken?s head. Gouken ducked under the attack and elbowed his opponent in the ribs, then he briskly smacked him across the face, making his eyes widen.

?Why you little-!?

Both continued fighting, ignoring the woman who crept up behind them, eyeing their bags cast aside before the impromptu battle. She slipped next to the discarded items, and silently searching them for a particular item?.

?HAHAHA!? She cackled as she stood up with both of the fighter?s wallets in each hand. Suddenly she put her fingers to her mouth and gave a shrill whistle. In the distance a car roared to life and shot forward toward her.

?SUCKERS!!? She laughed as a black dirty car pulled up beside her. She quickly hoped in the passenger side and the vehicle sped off, leaving the perplexed young men in the dust.

?SHE JUST-!!!? The two shouted as they looked at each other and then to the fleeing car, their eyes wide and mouths hung open. Without thinking Gouken jumped back and cupped his hands, gathering his ki into a small white ball?.

The stranger took off running towards the car, his eyes focused and his fists pumping through the air.

?HAHH!!? Gouken roared as he shot forward his hands, a white baseballl-sized ki springing forward, flying towards the car at lightning speed.

With a loud crash the blast connected with the back right side of the getaway car, destroying the tire and some of the fender. The car quickly began to slow, kicking up dust as it swerved around the road. The stranger quickly caught up, springing high into the air, his tightly clenched fist high above his head.

?Iron fist of truth!!? He yelled in Chinese as he punched through the front windshield, shattering the galss completely. The shocked thieves could only hold their hands in front of their faced as glass rained down on them, the driver pushing his foot on the gas in surprise. The stranger then grabbed both criminals by their throats and jerked them from the car, tossing them to the side of the road and jumping away himself as the black car ran off the road and into a tree.

Gouken and the stranger stared at the two thieves lying on the ground, both of them shocked and afraid.

?Give us our money.? Gouken commanded, his stern eyes locked on the crooks.

Wordlessly they handed them their wallets.

?Now, go.? Gouken ordered. They took off running.

?That?s it?! They robbed us!! Shouldn?t we punish them some more??? The stranger protested.

?Look at their car. It?s useless now. They?ve learned their lesson I bet.? Gouken nodded, his voice had returned to its natural, kind tone.

?I seriously doubt it. Eitherway, those were some nice moves back there. That ki control was excellent. Tell me, did you aim for the car, or just miss and hit the tire??

?It didn?t want to hurt them, only stop them from getting away. The tire was enough.?

?Nice. I never caught your name.?

?My name?s Gouken. And I didn?t catch your name either.?

?I didn?t throw it. But it?s Retsu.?

?Well Retsu, you did well yourself. Destroying all that glass with one punch? Can I see your hand?? Retsu showed him the fist, free of any cuts or bruises.

?Wow.?

?Come on Gouken. Like you couldn?t do that. By your blast, I can tell you?re pretty well trained. Unless you?re a pansy boy that worked on ?focusing their ki? all the time and not fighting.?

Gouken laughed, and Retsu chuckled at his comment.

?Where are you heading now friend??

Retsu shrugged. ?No where in particular, just kinda blowing with the wind?.? Retsu pantomimed the wind with his hands. Gouken heard a loud pop from the wrecked car in the distance.

?Hmm?well that?s where I?m going also.?

?Yes I?d like to come along with you.? Retsu said with closed eyes and a slight nod.

?What? I didn?t ask you.?

?You didn?t need to.?

Another dope chapter!!!
Keep up the good work!!!

We can’t, it wouldn’t have your “special touch” and probably wouldn’t sound the same or engulf us into the story like yours does.:smiley: :wink:

If your getting bored, just write one last final chapter (a lengthy one at that) showing the travels of Gouken and Akuma’s lives afer their training (about 5 or 10 years).

Ultimately leading up to Gouken training Ryu and Ken, and the death of Goutetsu and Gouken at the hands of Akuma…imo.

Been trying to write more for a while now…but nothing has come. This story is over, you know what else is going to happen. The characters are set on their paths…they can’t turn from them.

THE END

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:frowning: :frowning:

Damn… I could not stop reading this…from start to finish! It was wonderful! I wish i could read more. I truely loved this work, and what a way to end:lol: :frowning: I feel so sorry for Gouki…I want to know what he does next, where he goes…

Ahhh, now i feel like drawing a comic about this… I think i might draw a mini comic for a small section of this story…(what do you guys suggest?)
Or i’ll do some fan art for this maybe.
But right now I’m doing som fan art for the Capcom vs. SNK 2 bosses all together…

Ahh well, again, This story was great…The descriptions were well done, the details of the characters and the events were superb!
Can we expect another story from you like this?
Anytime soon?:confused:

Chapter XVI: Kings

His arm floated through the air as if it had a mind and purpose of its own. Gently arcing and waving like a nonchalant feather in the gentle breeze. This wafting limb moved in startling contrast to the fists and feet that clashed against it, unable to penetrate this quiet yet solid defense.

Gouki was only moving his left arm. His right was tucked behind him and he had long broken stance. He stood perfectly upright, his breathing even and slow, his uniform pressed and clean. His brow had not known sweat today. Yet he had spent the entire day fighting opponent after opponent with little breaks. The action paused, a man standing opposite from Gouki had ceased attacking and paused to stare in confusion, anger and jealously with a bit of wonder. Gouki?s left arm now lay slack and still. Neither said anything.

Gouki?s opponent quietly took in deep breaths, so deep his upper body swelled. Sweat rolled from his nose, chin and fingertips. He wanted to say something, perhaps question Gouki about his strength or make up an excuse to why after all his efforts he could not land a blow. He wanted to say something, but he found that even his voice was tired from hollering and grunting. He only remained silent under Gouki?s imposing gaze.

Dawn was moments away; the air was heavy with moisture and the birds singing was a welcome sound compared to the hissing of the insects. These men had been fighting since the middle of the night, after even the thieves had gone to sleep before the first person rose to face the day. And one of these fighting men was dead tired. Gouki stared at this person before him, fighting with everything he had and yet Gouki was only using a fraction of a fraction of his own power to stop him. Gouki felt sorry for his opponent because in the back of his mind he believed that he was once in the same position. Yet he knows he was never that weak.
Without a word Gouki turned and walked away, not caring to look behind him for he knew he would not be followed by anything greater than eyes. He is a one eyed man in the land of the blind; here he is king?

And it disgusts him.

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?Yes! We?re almost at the top!!?

Gouken shouted more to himself than his companion Retsu. He was beginning to wonder why he listened to that village elder when he was told that a ?dragon of a man? lived and trained at the summit of the tallest mountain in sight. He didn?t think twice and started climbing, just like any challenge presented to him-but something felt different now. And of course he couldn?t define what it was.

?This better not be a wild goose chase, or that old man is gonna need a new hip!? Retsu chuckled as he reached for something to grab unto to continue climbing.

?There?s only one way to find out.? Said Gouken as he placed his foot a little higher, the top slowly becoming more within reach. Suddenly Gouken?s thoughts shifted to Goutetsu. He hadn?t seen his former master for at least 6 months now; he wondered how his teacher was doing. Gouken chuckled to himself as he thought: ?I bet he?s happily drinking tea or something.?

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Gouki wandered the backs roads on the outside of town perplexed with his situation. His power had hit a wall; he had reached a crossroads. He overwhelmed his challengers now, to a point where it was routine and nothing was learned. These ?challengers? simply were not anything resembling a challenge anymore. But on the other hand, fights against Goutetsu, Gouki, Gen, perhaps even Master Fei were inversely pointless. He was thrashed so efficiently he learned nothing. They were so much stronger than him he couldn?t begin to analyze and compare. He felt as if he were drowning?either in their collective strength or his total weakness he couldn?t tell but he knew something had to be done.

But for the moment Gouki could only wander the path before him, and wonder.

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?Um?hello?? Gouken shouted out into the air, hearing his echo bounce around the surroundings. His call was not returned.

?We have come looking for Kuwabatake-sama, the ?king of the mountain??We wish to be instructed by him!? Retsu shouted, noting that from the echo he sounded nervous and frightened. There was still no answer.

?We?ve been tricked Gouken. We climbed this mountain for nothing. Silly old man, I bet fooling travelers is his only source of amusement-?

?No we didn?t! Retsu look! Someone lives here.? Gouken pointed to a modest log cabin about 200 feet away from them.

?And look, this is awfully flat for the top of a mountain?? Again Gouken was right, the summit was a 400-foot wide circle. Also the ground was completely even and flat.

?Oh?? Retsu stammered.

?Whoever did this, did it on purpose.?

?That is correct intruders!!?

A deep, authoritative voice resonated throughout the entire area. Gouken and Retsu were frozen in anticipation. They looked at each other, mostly because there was nothing else to look at.

?I am Kuwabatake-sama and I am willing to fight with you two! However, I will only duel under one condition!?The voice boomed from nowhere and yet everywhere.

?Name it Kuwabatake-sama, and we will do our best to follow it.? Retsu said while bowing.

?Haha good! My condition is that once you fight me, you will fight me without restraint! You will fight me with your absolute best! You will fight?as if your very lives depend on it. And they will for I will be doing the same.? The voice then faded into the mists of the surrounding mountains.

?I don?t understand??fight without restraint?? Does he know how strong we are?? Gouken?s question was oddly without the slightest undertone of arrogance, it was almost childlike in its simplicity.

?I don?t know Gouken?but I?m sure it?s the other way around for some reason. Regardless, we will find out in a moment.?

From the mists emerged a figure, slowly walking towards the two young travelers. The stranger?s gait was slow and steady, his feet flat. Gouken could hear the sound of the man breathing. The figure stopped, and there stood Kuwabatake. His form was draped in a long bearskin cloak that stopped at his bare ankles. His face was partly concealed by the bear?s face, the eyes still frozen in the final moment of aggressive desperation.

?So?you both have climbed this mountain to battle with me?? The voice was deep, dignified and secure.

?Yes, we will be honored to spar with you Kuwabatake-sama.? Retsu said with a bow.

?Enough with the bowing. I?m not some tired old dignitary that needs to be reminded of and worshipped for how strong he once was. Stand up and get into stance! We?ve wasted too much time not fighting!?

Gouken was taken aback by Kuwabatake?s fowardness but tried not to reveal it as he snapped into fighting position. Retsu blinked in confusion once then did the same.

?Hmmmmmm?? Kuwabatake mumbled to himself as his animal skin fell to the floor with a dead thud.

??weighted clothes?? Retsu said to himself.

Kuwabatake then kicked the discarded skin away, it crashed somewhere in the distance noisily disturbing some trees.

Gouken thought the king of the mountain seemed bigger now. The man was over 7 feet tall, and he had to be over 275 lbs with his barrel chest and thick tree trunk limbs. His fists alone were as big as Gouken?s head. Kuwabatake was also quite hairy. Black coarse hair was all over him; he had a thick bushy beard that ambled to the fringes of his stomach. The hair from the top of his head went to his shoulders and it was spread everywhere, Kuwabatake didn?t care enough to brush it from his face. This sight to behold only had one a pair of tattered grey pants, with a black belt around his waist almost dyed brown from dirt.

?Well, attack! Kuwabatake roared, standing upright with his hands clasped behind him.

His demand was met. A sidekick from Gouken was fired at him while a spinning roundhouse came at him from Retsu.

?Far too frontal for an opening.?

Kuwabatake said as he gripped the legs of Gouken and Retsu by their ankles. Without saying anymore he lifted them off the ground and slammed them into each other. Gouken and Retsu stumbled over each other to stand and when they were on their feet, Kuwabatake was 40 feet away.

?Now try again! I refuse to let a battle begin so horridly!?

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A solitary drop of water crashed to the ground, miles away from any person except one. A single drop falling rang as loud in Gouki?s ears as a plate smashing to the floor or a gunshot. In the darkness Gouki sat, his mind retreated to his inner self yet expanded beyond his body, to the far reaches of his new dwelling. A cave, wet and full of jutting stalagmites and stalactites that formed a unique canopy that seemingly only Gouki could appreciate.

He had been living here for a week now, only coming out when it was necessary. Food was nonexistent in his dark abode. A dozen candles stood atop boulders and formations, the wax dripping down the rock faces and the white stalks of varying heights; some stumps and some a foot high. Gouki had carved a home for himself out of the ancient untamed rock, and he enjoyed his living conditions.

Suddenly Gouki shot to his feet, his eyes still closed as he stood in stance. Mechanically his body began to move, punching the air and kicking with a precision rarely found in someone his age. He imagined himself in a fight, his opponent a formless hulk of flesh and bone.

WAP! He punched his invisible opponent square in his unguarded chest, making him stagger backward. Gouki shot forward with an uppercut, then a right hook and finally a jumping slash of a kick. The shadow melted towards the ground. Gouki picked him up by his arm and threw him into a stone wall; the limp body smacked the wet stone and landing in a puddle. Gouki walked forward in his mind?s eye towards his opponent, who began to take shape.

Suddenly the opponent rose, and it was Gouken. Gouki gasped to find his brother staring back at him, a cunning smile and his eyes flashing with playful intensity. Gouki attacked with a punch, it was slapped away effortlessly. Gouki jumped back and fired a ki ball, Gouken let it connect and Gouki stared in horror as it did nothing. Gouki cursed as he rushed forward with a flurry of attacks, punching and kicking at blinding speed. Gouki?s teeth locked together as his face transformed into an expression of determination and anger. The rush of attacks suddenly stopped once Gouken caught Gouki?s fist, and held it tight. Gouki looked up into his brother?s eyes, feeling a wave of fear sweep over him as Gouken smiled and reared back his fist?..

WHAM!

The shock jerked Gouki into reality. He fell to the ground, gasping for breath and sweating profusely. His eyes stared blankly forward and his mouth hung agape as Gouki searched for meaning in his vision. He reached his hand to feel his face.

His nose was bleeding; a trickle ran down his finger as he felt his face in the darkness.

WHAT THE FUCK?!

FISTS IS BACK?!

…stealing the glory from Ansatsuken Kid RIGHT AFTER I post my new chapter. Shame. :lol:

damnnn, a suprise!!

Woah! man, i thought this was over…but it’s not!! YAAHHOOOOO!!! Thank goodness it’s still going! I’m so happy now, lol…But…I want to read more now:bluu:

Anyways, Keep 'em coming! Gosh, It just gets better and better!:smiley:

Welcome back Fist of Fury!! Keep up the good work!

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Go against us and you DIE!!!..Simple as that.

Oh man…I am happy you are back FOF. I missed this story…keep it up please!

Chapter XVII: Leaving The Past

?Haaah!!? Gouken shouted as he fired a white ball of ki the size of a basketball at Kuwabatake.

?Alright let?s rush him!? He shouted to Retsu and they both dashed towards their opponent. They had outrun the Gou-hadoken when they met with Kuwabatake. Gouken and Retsu both threw punches aimed at Kuwabatake?s chest knowing he would catch them. With his right arm held by Kuwabatake Retsu tried a sweep while Gouken attempted a jumping roundhouse. Kuwabatake lifted his forward foot to avoid the sweep and leaned his upper body back to precisely evade the edges of Gouken?s foot.

?Better!? A huge fist slammed into Gouken?s chest knocking him off balance, Gouken?s body curling around Kuwabatake?s arm. The moment crawled for Gouken; a burning sensation erupted in the center of his chest and seemed to burn through his stomach and lungs. It shot up his arms and legs, finally boiling to the top of his head. His mind blanked out and when he regained his senses he found he was lying on his back. He lifted his head to see Retsu exchanging blows with the king of the mountain.

Retsu shot out with a quick jab and Kuwabatake slapped it away responding with a right cross that made Retsu?s head tilt to the side. Kuwabatake then performed a precise front kick but Retsu had recovered and guarded against it. The attack still made Retsu?s stiff body slide a couple inches in the dry and level ground. Retsu sprang back and switched styles, suddenly crouching low to the ground with his hands formed into sharp points.

?Mantis. Wonder why he chose that one?? Said Gouken as he began to get up.

Kuwabatake jumped on the offensive with a quick roundhouse that could fell a tree but Retsu leaped completely over it and got in close, delivering 20 quick strikes all over Kuwabatake?s torso in under 5 seconds. A backfist from Kuwabatake ended Retsu?s streak, crashing across Retsu?s face and making him stumble blindly a few feet before crumbling to the ground. Before Kuwabatake could take advantage of his disoriented Retsu Gouken had sprung to action and knocked Kuwabatake off the ground and away with a solid surprise flying kick.

Retsu stared at the scene with his mouth hung open, Kuwabatake had been knocked 5 feet into the air and was falling backwards when he did a sharp backflip and landed perfectly on his feet. Without a moment to spare Kuwabatake shot his arms outward, a golden shimmering ki ball the size of Gouken?s torso was the result. The attack met Gouken before he could touch the ground. He was struck fiercely and launched away, too far to spring back and be an immediate threat to Kuwabatake. As soon as he stopped skidding Gouken jumped to his feet in stance. But he wasn?t even sure he could fire an accurate Gou Hadoken with his distance. Suddenly Retsu skidded to a stop right beside Gouken, he dusted himself off and stood up side by side with his traveling partner.

?He?s way too strong. We have to fight him together.? Gouken said without looking at his friend, his eyes busy concentrating on the idle Kuwabatake.

?Will that even help? Maybe he?ll thrash us at a slower rate if we take him as one.?

?Well we could try it.?

?Eh, whatever. If I can still use my arms and legs after this, remind me to teach that old man who lead us here a thing or two about Mantis style.?

The sky was beginning to turn a hazy orange as dusk began to roll through the day.

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Gouken grunted as he ate a couple of quick jabs then howled as an uppercut tore his feet from the ground and brought him crashing to the earth.

Retsu narrowly ducked under a sweeping right hook from Kuwabatake only to catch 2 jabs from Kuwabatake?s left hand. Retsu took it in stride, attempting a front kick but being far too predictable and slow. Kuwabatake caught his leg and punched him squarely in the jaw. Retsu rocked backward but Kuwabatake jerked him forward and punched him in the gut.

?Retsu!!? Gouken shouted as he took off running to help his friend.

Finally Kuwabatake locked both arms around Retsu?s leg and tossed him into the air. The king of the mountain then dashed up to where Retsu was falling, hoped into the air to catch him only to slam him down into the earth harder than gravity could. Kuwabatake stood up and waited for Retsu to return to his feet and limp into stance. Then Kuwabatake pounced, he shot forward and caught Retsu?s easily predicted punch and delivered a cop to Retsu?s neck that made him gasp for air and stagger backward. Kuwabatake then ran up to Retsu and kicked him so hard Retsu spun around 3 times before he crashed to the ground and moved no more.

Kuwabatake left Retsu to lay there and turned around to catch a glimpse of a speeding white ball of ki before it slammed into his unguarded torso. The power was only enough to make the king of the mountain stagger a single step.

?Its just you and I now Gouken.?

Gouken glanced over at the unconscious Retsu, his face showed no emotion.

?I guess you?re right.?

There was little blue left in the clouds.

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As Gouken was held up in the air, his face to the sky, he could only go limp under Kuwabatake?s grasp. He had exhausted himself fighting; all of his efforts were nowhere near what it took to keep Kuwabatake down. Gouken looked up at the night stars as raindrops fell on his face, the moment standing still for him.

?I tried?? He thought to himself as he began to feel his body move through the air toward the ground.

Gouken?s body was slammed into the ground so hard birds perched in trees 100 feet away hastily took to the air startled.

A classic ?powerbomb? left Gouken on his back, half of him buried in the now slippery mud as the rain fell on his battered body. His arms and legs were outsretched and he was not moving save for his taking in of short gasps of air and starting up at the night with blank eyes. Kuwabatake stood with his back to his fallen opponents; his hands still fists.

?You both have been defeated. It was a good fight and I was surprised by how strong you two were. All that power has a little refinement. But not enough. I?m getting out of the rain now. Good luck to the both of you.? Kuwabatake began to walk away. Then he noticed the sloshing of someone determined slowly rising to his feet.

His upper body was hunched over and his arms dangled in front of him. His legs wobbled and his body screamed at him to collapse, but Gouken was up. Kuwabatake turned around.

?Your friend is unconscious because mentally he gave up a while ago; his mind was just waiting for his body to take all it could supposedly handle. But you Gouken, I hit you harder and fought you faster?and you?re still standing. I?ve lost count of how many times I?ve knocked you down, but you are still on your feet. You know I?m stronger than you so why are you still ready to fight??

?Because I won?t allow myself to be defeated.?

Kuwabatake?s eyes lit up as he smiled big.

?Yes! That?s it! This is the point where you actually learn something. Before now?your fighting was the mechanical movements of your master and your master?s master and so on?the trained instincts of your discipline. But now?now you show me what is inside of you. Now you show me what you can do when it?s no longer a game?when its no longer just a ?sparring match?. I have to say, I?m excited.? Kuwabatake snapped into stance, his eyes still flashing with anticipation.

Without another word between them they leapt high into the air after each other. They clashed 30 feet from the ground, Kuwabatake?s fist buried into Gouken?s cheek while Gouken?s extended leg drilled into Kuwabatake?s stomach. Neither flinched as they sprung off each other and landed on the ground in their original places. A golden ki ball broke the suddenly eerie silence, speeding towards Gouken. He sidestepped it and put up his guard just in time to absorb a driving knee from the king of the mountain. After the failed knee Gouken felt Kuwabatake?s weight shift and knew exactly what to do.

A silent Gou-Shoryuken ripped through Kuwabatake, knocking him off his feet far away his body limp as it sailed in the drizzly night.

?UGH!? Kuwabatake strained as he hastily composed himself and fired another ki ball between his legs while falling. Gouken?s feet had not touched the wet soil either and once again he was struck by a golden ki ball while hanging in the air. Gouken now lay in the mud, his ribs on fire but still wordlessly he was returning to his feet. Another sudden ki ball slammed into Gouken but did not knock him down, only made his feet slide in the wet mud. Gouken slowly walked towards Kuwabatake, defenseless but determined. Kuwabatake fired another ki attack; Gouken sidestepped it and continued his slow advance. Kuwabatake rocketed forward and punched Gouken in the center of his chest. Gouken?s body buckled under the attack but Gouken did not flinch nor utter a sound, delivering a brutal elbow to the side of Kuwabatake?s head. The king of the mountain stumbled then performed a spinning roundhouse that clipped Gouken?s head. Before Kuwabatake could plant both feet on the ground he was hit with a powerful Gou-Hadoken at point blank range that sent him skidding across the mud 30 feet away.

Kuwabatake, the grizzled old fighter that thought he had grown too strong for any human to seriously challenge him stood up and found he was gasping for air. He looked over at Gouken, who was riddled with bloodstains, cuts and bruises but was still walking forward. He was covered in mud that slid across his body from the water but still he was up. He focused on Gouken?s face. It was devoid of life, with cold eyes and a stone facial expression. The fire no longer burned in his eyes, it had all been sent to his fists.

?He no longer cares what happens to himself?as long as he hits me??

Kuwabatake stared at the approached Gouken, then he noticed the sound:

A low guttural growl slowly intensifying, a sound pulled from the deepest reaches of the human psyche where civilization had not penetrated.

?Gouken?don?t let it take over?? Kuwabatake?s voice sounded guarded.

But it was too late for talking to do anything. Gouken roared as he launched himself into Kuwabatake, opening with a headbutt to stun the king of the mountain then a blur of punches to Kuwabatake?s body ending with a driving elbow to Kuwabatake?s stomach that made the large fighter choke on his own vomit. Gouken then performed a powerful front kick that launched Kuwabatake high into the air and while Kuwabatake floated Gouken charged his Messastu Gou Hado, his teeth pulled back into the primal snarl of an animal on the offensive while his strain showed itself in a low wheeze. Once Gouken unleashed the attack Kuwabatake had regained his senses and saw the large red comet gunning for him.

?RECKLESS!!? The king of the mountain fell towards the attack with his fist reared behind him. At the very last moment he shot his arm out and punched the destructive ki ball, obliterating the Messasstu Gou Hadou?the attack that was supposed to kill him?into many small shards of shimmering red confetti.

Before Kuwabatake could land Gouken pounced on him, but Kuwabatake effortlessly kicked him away. Gouken fell backwards but recovered in mid air and landing on his feet, hunched over and drooling.

Kuwabatake dashed toward Gouken and suddenly stopped a couple of feet away from him, just in time to easily dodge Gouken?s overextended punching arm and tag him in the temple with a reverse elbow. Gouken staggered so Kuwabatake grabbed him by his hair and kneed him in the face. Gouken exploded with a ki attack that was at too close a range, knocking both fighters away from each other and to the mud with a red flash.

Kuwabatake flipped to his feet to find Gouken in the air above him, gathering power. Several red ki balls began to rain upon Kuwabatake as Gouken hollered intelligibly from the air.

?ENOUGH!? Kuwabatake roared and in an instantly called upon the power to fire one wave of golden ki that obliterated Gouken?s offensive and struck Gouken in the air like a speeding train. He splashed to the ground a few seconds later, and as he attempted to get up a golden speedball struck his torso and knocked him on his back.

?Satsui No Hado is a one trick pony. Blind rage such as this means nothing to someone who knows his art. Gouken! Large amounts of power are practically useless if they are implemented stupidly and ineffectively. You?ll cause much destruction of property?.but you won?t hit your opponent, certainly won?t kill them. With great power?one must have great skill to ultilize all their potential. And skill comes with CONTROL Gouken! And control is something you certainly don?t have much of right now. I know you hear me Gouken! You don?t need massive amounts of power! You need absolute, complete control of every drop of power you have!! You have power to spare Gouken, but once you really control it all you?ll go from being a really good fighter to a great fighter?perhaps even a legendary one!? Kuwabatake?s voice began to get deeper and softer, he was attempting to invade Gouken?s senses.

?Gouken?you know this is not the way?you know no true strength can be found in this?.you need control??

Gouken roared suddenly and fired a Gou Hadoken. Kuwabatake let the attack connect; it did not harm him.

?Control yourself?that is the key.? The voice began to echo in Gouken?s mind?slowly driving back the madness. The soft pats of the raindrops hitting the ground began to filter through the red haze to Gouken?s senses. Gouken?s wheeze was softer and softer, his posture straightening bit by bit by the second. His eyes regained their character.

??.Kuwabatake-sama?thank you?I think I?see it now?? Was all Gouken could mutter as he fell to his knees. The pain of all his injuries began to rapidly overtake him, flooding his mind and overwhelming him.

As he was blacking out?he heard the king of the mountain say:

?If I were to judge?I?d call you the winner of this fight without a doubt.?

what the f it isn’t saying I posted here…so this a bump to let people know I posted something.

Good stuff man…keep it coming please. This is the best fanfic on the damn site. Just make sure it has a decent ending…

oh it will.

I plan to finish in under 25 chapters.

Good stuff…I’m looking foward to it.

Good stuff FOF, glad you started the series back up cuz its the best Fic in this entire forum.

Can’t wait for the next chapter… :nunchuck: :rock:

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FOF ?? next chapter ?? :wonder:

Yes please post the next chapter this story is EXCELLENT!!!

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Chapter XVIII: Red

?Osssuuuuu?..?

Gouki?s breath was patiently expelled from his lungs as he sat completely still and rigid. His eyes were closed; he was looking deep within himself and attempting to tap into the raging river that was his inner essence. He was developing the technique of rapidly tapping into his power and bringing it to the forefront in the form of a Messastu Go Hadou. Before he could charge up lethal force in about 2 minutes, and after no doubt days of practicing over and over he could charge the same amount of energy into the ki ball in 15 seconds. Still far too long for Gouki, and any fighter he attempted to use the attack on. So he continued training, forgoing a decent meal and a humane amount of rest.

Gouki stood in stance, first looking at the formations of the rock around him then just letting his mind wander freely. He thought back to the beginning of his training, back when he and his brother started under Goutetsu. Gouki?s memories were full of moments when he was alone; mimicking stances and movements from his master, from his opponents, from the scrolls he read. And he was doing the same thing now. But where was it getting him? His mind flashed to a very young Gouki meditating in the forest, then the image crashed into Gouki?s mind; the picture of his ribs being broken by a driving knee from Go Hibiki. Gouki?s mind jumped to watching himself train in the dusty library, open books and scrolls scattered everywhere. In a flash he remembered the powerful burning of his own ki attack being deflected back at him by Gen. All the years he stayed true to methods he thought were correct, the methods he was told were right, and they brought him defeat. But what about what he was warned against? A mix of feelings began to brew in Gouki?no longer just anger at Gouken. He was angry with the way he was taught by Goutetsu, he was angry for wasting his time on a path he no longer felt he chose for himself?and he was angry because he blindly followed it.

But he stuffed those emotions back down once again, and decided to focus on the task at hand. He closed his eyes and let his energy flow through his body, calm waves of energy building up for his Messastu Gou Hadou. He didn?t stop where he usually did; he pulled more energy from himself to make the attack stronger?the strongest he could possibly make it. He slowly let down the mental failsafes; the dams that blocked the totality of his power for his own protection. He gathered ki in his hands until his fingertips and palms burned, and pushed farther. He had to push himself if he wanted to be in his brother?s league. He had to shatter his limitations if he was to be the strongest. Gouki knew this all too well, for his old method did not work. He now had a new regiment. He was going to break himself, and rebuild. Gouki?s joints began to ache and sweat cascaded down his face?he had been gathering power for what seemed like hours but only a few minutes. Still it was longer than he ever had before, and longer than he should if he were in a real fight. Once Gouki felt that he was about to collapse, he shot his hands forward and released the Messastu Go Hadou. The white ki ball?s glow lit up the entire cave as if it were daylight itself, the attack twice the size of Gouki?s body and speeding towards nothing it shimmered as if the gods produced it themselves. Gouki smiled weakly as he slid to his knees, drained of all his energy and beyond weary. He was satisfied with that one; he knew that attack carried a great amount of power?enough to destroy Gen, Gouken and possibly Goutetsu if it connected. Gouki sighed as he let himself crumple to the wet ground.

Then he heard the thunder as the attack connected with the cave wall in the distance, followed by a tremor that shook the ground where Gouki lay. Gouki?s upper body sprang up, but the cave returned to silence. A bit of dust and gravel fell from the ceiling onto Gouki?s lap then a great rumbling resounded throughout the cave. More debris began to fall, and Gouki?s eyes darted around his surroundings.

?No! It can?t be-?

Before he could think anything else, the cave around him fell in on itself and everything descended into an inescapable darkness.

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Gouki awoke to find it was no different than being unconscious. Only there wasn?t the screaming pain that spanned his entire body.

All he could discern was that he was on his back; he felt he was deeper underground than he originally was and that the ground was wetter than it should have been. The water was warm and thick. He realized it was his own blood, a puddle of it beneath him. His next realization was that he could barely feel the bottom half of his body. His legs felt as if they were slipping into a coma, little sharp tingles of feeling pulsed through them but trying to even flex a toe resulted in nothing. Gouki?s hand felt around in the dark to run his hands over a piece of jagged, cold, wet rock?and then his own numb flesh. There was no space in between. A stalactite had fallen from the ceiling and impaled him to the ground through his midsection. Gouki?s hand flopped beside him as his mouth hung open in shock, choking on his own air.

?I am going to die??

The thought burrowed into his mind and heart, so deep it struck him to the core. The thought of the end of his life being so close made a lump in Gouki?s throat.

?I?I can?t die here?not now?? Gouki struggled as he spoke, speaking to no one. The words fell from his mouth like drool, he felt powerless in the darkness.

Is this how you want your story to end Gouki?

A ethereal voice echoed from the cavern walls.

?No?It can?t?.I have to become stronger…?

Stronger for what? You can dispose of any opponent that you fight?except for a few select ones?.And what do they matter? There are several people better than you and so many that can?t compare to you. What does it matter?

?They are not better than me-ARGH!? Gouki roared, the strain from his shout made his body shift some and brought him great pain.

Look at you. Your fear of their strength only makes you weaker. You?ve been Goutetsu?s trained dog and Gouken?s punching bag for too long because you assumed what they told you was right. You know the key is not relentless study Gouki. The key is what they?ve told you to hide, what they told you was holding you back? The voice was barely a whisper in the cavern, but it was heard loud and clear.

?What is that?!? Gouki shouted, desperate to know.

Your anger. They knew the power you had, the strength your anger would bring out. But they withheld it from you! Because they knew you would be stronger than both of them!

?No…they didn?t know?and if they did they wanted to help me?rage is blind power??

POWER IS POWER.

The voice boomed, but boomed without a sign of emotion. As if the volume had just spiked but the steady intensity remained the same.

Your feelings, your will to be the strongest?they give you strength! You?ve struggled to keep them bottled up and it has kept you weak and impotent. Now is the time, your final chance to reach for the power that has always been just beyond your grasp. You could die in this cave a pathetic nobody, or you could embrace your inner self?all of yourself and become the only warrior that matters! Unleash your true strength or die Gouki!

The voice began to ebb; the whisper from nowhere retreating from the sharp wet rocks and sliding back into the shadows.

?What do I do?? How do I unlock my true self? How do I tap into this power?!? Gouki?s desperate voice echoed in the caverns but it was not returned.

?Well look at you!?

Gouki looked up to find himself staring at Gouken. But how?

?What are you doing here?!? Gouki thundered, then coughed blood.

?I?m just here to watch. Hey, do you need any help?? Gouken bent over a little and offered his hand to Gouki, the open palm just a few inches from Gouki?s face. Gouki spat at it.

?I?d rather die than receive help from you!?

?I knew you?d say that. And it looks like that?s exactly what you?ll do too. Well with you dead I guess its up to me to teach our style to the next generation?.shit I can?t remember any of the katas though?? Gouken straightened himself up, and pondered.

?Fool! You never gave a damn about Ansatsuken did you? You just wanted to spar, to fight?to get dirty and bloody. I studied; I tried to learn everything there was to know about our style! ?.and you?You sat on your ass if there wasn?t a tournament coming up!!? Gouki?s shouting racked his body with pain but he didn?t care.

?And look where it got me.?

Gouken?s sly smile said it all. He grinned in the dying Gouki?s face, the same grin he had shown to opponents when he knew the fight was close to finishing. The same grin that he had since his carefree youth. Gouki stared at it, focused on it. Refusing to blink so his eyes began to water. He stared in horror and pure hatred.

Gouken then turned around and began to walk away; the hallucination fading into the rocks.

Gouki?s anger began to boil inside of him, bubbling faster and faster until his clenched fists quivered and his jaw felt it would shatter. Thoughts of all the attacks that ever caught him by surprise flashed through his mind. The crushing blows that chipped away at his strength and his resolve over and over again, now began to build him up. He let his anger flow through him, like hot lava running through the veins of the planet earth. Images flashed in Gouki?s mind faster and faster. His father falling to the ground dead, the pain of his own brother?s fist, the image of Gen on the end of Gouken?s flying kick, Gouken under the influence of Satsui No Hado, Goutetstu teaching him and his brother to meditate, Goutetsu sliding the ceremonial beads around Gouken?s neck, General Fujima?s grinning face. The images flew by faster and faster, slowly gaining a red tint as they whizzed through Gouki?s mind.

Gouki howled and shot his fist forward, smashing the rock that had pinned him down into pebbles. He jumped to his feet?his body pulsing with energy?his fingertips anxious and his eyes wide and blank.

?ARRRRGGGGGGHHHHHH??? Gouki screamed from the bottom of his soul as he lashed out at the surroundings around him. Firing ki blasts in every direction, punching and kicking the cavern walls so hard they crumbled under his limbs. He was in a frenzy; attacking everything and anything until there would be nothing left. It isn?t known how long Gouki was down there under Satsui No Hado?.but he had blown himself out of the rubble as soon as the first hints of dawn began to streak across the sky.

He finally had a chance to look at himself under the approaching light. He was bleeding from everywhere. Deep cuts lined his entire body plus the hole in his abdomen from the stalactite. He was sure he had broken a rib or two also. But he was not feeling any pain. As a beam of sunlight streaked across the sky Gouki looked directly at it and he had to squint. His anger began to retreat back inside of him, until he felt calm once again. Gouki looked down at his injuries one more time, and all of the searing pain at once rushed to his brain. He collapsed on the spot, flopping onto the green grass like a dead body. But he was alive. And he was reborn.