your coloring is good on that last pic, as for your line work i think you need more practice i would recomend aquiring some anatomy books, and read up some how to draw books:wink: also plan more your poses also if it might help sometimes when i have a hard time coming up with a pose i look at some random magazines to help me on planning my pose that i will use:wink:
@hanzo: thankyou for the tips indeed i really got messy when it comes to lines ill try to fix it.
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/1786/schoolgirl2nm4.jpg
have some cake guys 
Yesh its my sakura guys still on wip, tell me what you think about it. >.<
my other wip
your colouring is vvvvveeeeeeerrrrrrrryyyyy nice.
great art
Thank you hanzo im thinking about some random magazine could you recommend me some? XD
Daigo: yesh coloring is nice but i wish i could draw good bodies like some guys here 
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Heres my new work on sakura cleaned and refined, usually sakura is smiling and happy but i made this one looks serious >.< , tell me what you think.
image resized
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/6638/sakuraco8.jpg
non sf work
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/1385/warriorgirl24ln0.jpg
How old are you? I think it’s great how your improving. Look at the first post then come all the way to the last in just 3 months. I am gonna start learning to draw and have got a lot of material to cover. At the moment, I don’t know how to draw anatomy too well and the hands and feet but I have a ton of ebooks that cover that and I just have to sit down and start going through those. I’ll definitely try to post some of my work later on once I get better. 
Lol yeah thanks for the notice i still remember my first post here :wonder: , i too have lots of drawing tutorials and books but i dont really got the time to read those >.< . All i do is just look at those drawings and try to remember their bodies and apply it to my drawings. Ill post the finished works soon maybe this week.
This is the update of my drawing just finished on lineart, gonna go now…(goes to place where it sucks…work >.< )
Hi guys sorry for double posting again but i wanna show my finish work of sakura, in mah own style (own style which means its proportion are off >.< ) . Hope you like it and yeah i forgot the reason i wanna put sakura that way is you often see sakura happy this time i make her dead serious!