Grammatical errors? I don’t see any right away, but please point em out if you do.
I only look at the “about us” section for correction because the news is always filled with errors.
In the members section you have
**We have a server hosted by www.fragoholic.com, to which the IP is 207.8.130.210:27017. **
That’s a fragment.
Towards the end your sentences kinda run away from you.
If you like, I can re-write it for you with the same idea and words. I’ll just switch some things around to avoid errors.
4th Annual PGL awards(Yes, we do more awards than soultrain a year)
Fags: The new members of kwr. I like Trippie but your mascot won’t shut the F*ck up( I dunno if hes a member but he has the tag) and Morph. He said he was out and I was like ok, get out =P
Then he proceeded to do a v_say “Is tenacious oz gay?”
Dumbass: BMD. Doesn’t even post here and when he does he insults us. Also for stealing the 1000 post which should go to the thread starter…
Most Improved CS player: Tru, same as last award show. Hassan only does well on awp map but what the hell. Close second.
Fag of the Year: Monkey(Chris or whatever his name is. My name is weird but atleast you know who I am). Lying about his age, his height, his brother and probably about his gender…
Best CS player: I’ve seen Steve play way too good recently.
Best Story Teller: We have someone who has unseeded HyperX. This goes to Tru. Ever listen to him tell a story on mic during a game? So much purpose.
B|7ch award: Most of you Except for Steve and Billy for treating me like a retard whenever I come on the server now.
Best Movie: Anything off of exploited black teens 
LVP: (Least Valuble Player) WHo else. Myself as always… Don’t gimme that griup shizz either Alex. That fell apart when Keith left…
MVP: (Most Valuble Player) All of your ego’s get this award
Award for Vocalist of the year (CS Style). Oz and his rendition of Toxicity by System of a Down during cs_seige.
LOL! hate me all you want billy, i didn’t insult this thread by posting that, anyways dont care about a srk thread man. I dont even post on srk like that no more
Oh, well, I wrote that a couple months ago, I only changed some stuff to fit the new site. Oh well.
My ward nooo!! I had that for 3 or 2 time staright noo… oh wellz
but i dont get wah BMD posting and the other one before
Brandon billy never said that 
thats craxy Oz that posted that:lol:
one more award
Most Confused - Everyone posting on PGL
Why, Asfand wtf are you talking about?! You be Starting Problems with everyone… Not coo dude.
Keith was my boy, but he wasn’t part of the group i hung out with, When he left it made no difference to who i talked to. To you maybe, but you need to make up for stuff that you don’t got.
OrOcHi Is So Wise 
Sorry billy, i didn’t know that was not you.
boy do i feel stupid:o :o
hey asfand, you dont even know me like that to be calling me those types of names, see i am not like some people who get all pissed and mad about these things. I will let this go though
:evil: arrrg there she blows:eek:
:lol: :lol: :lol: Dark DeMOM ?? Okay, issues right there…
Asfand… I don’t know what your problem is, but let me be the first to openly say that ever since you left KWR, you’ve been acting like an egotistical ass. Don’t take that personally, because I’m just saying the truth. You say all sorts of things and when you are shown wrong, all you can say is your new favorite abbreviation, “w/e”. You’re insulting people like me and others, some whom you don’t even know. You weren’t like this before you left the clan. And now that you have, you seem to be this new person, a new person that I frankly would not like to know. I’m only posting this because I’m your friend, and I’m letting you know what I feel, so don’t take it personally. Those who don’t give a shit about you would not and will not say a word.
-SkyLancer
Make up for what? Not being into gaming? Wise my ass crack…
I haven’t been acting different. WTF are you talking about? Even Billy might agree with me on this one… I only left because I hate admin and people keep comin at me over a game.
IT"S NOT LIFE! You all take it too seriously. Every time I even go on your server, someone threatens to kick me off or some stupid shit…
Your all Dicks and take every thing so seriously. Look, Dara threatened my life and I didn’t even take that as serious. You all lost your humor if you all even had any. Except for hyper and kaboom. They’ve learned to not take me serious at all…
If anyone disagrees with me or decides to get all high and mighty STFU in advance goddammit.
Insult me with “You have to make up for what you don’t have”. You never EVER say that too somebody. Even I don’t.
Stop whining and bitching. Grow up, I have no idea what your problems are and I don’t wanna help you with them until you grow up but ever since senior year you’ve all acted weird and like children.
Watch Tru threaten me with an ass kicking or something or Alex try to get everyone to gang up on me Like thet both always do.
And you know I’m right…
UHHH ASFAND! WTF ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT. What i said about making up things is… You may have been in KEITHS group, But when he left, you had yo chill with SOMEONE! So, to MAKE UP for the Situation, you came to us. And Never once!! NEVER ONCE Did i every say “Hey guys Asfand is at it again, lets all look at him and laugh, and make him feel bad and shit. Fuck that. People take the game seriously?! You took it to levels your damn self. I thank tru for taking it to a lvl more then a game. Its more fun, and shows off skills. A Waste of Time, Maybe but so the fuck what. Its better then sitting in a room after class doing nothing then smoking weed and wasting my brain away. Why do i play games?! So i wont do that shit. You have to many things on your mind, and We put up with it. I know you hate me, and say it as much as you like, " oh i hate everyone” to hell with that you hate me maybe more then anyone else. So just be a man and admit it.
Admin_tsay BizzarO hates OrOcHi
Anyway off the subject… Anyone notice how cool i am?
Asfand, you assume way too much for your own good.
“Watch Tru threaten me with an ass kicking or something or Alex try to get everyone to gang up on me Like thet both always do.”
We’re the ones always sticking up for you. I may have taken the game seriously before, but then again who hasn’t? And why be in a clan if you’re not a little bit serious? The shit started falling apart for you when the incident with Dara happened. All you talk about is “even Dara threatened me and I didn’t take it so serious” and “everyone is so serious”. I don’t know what the hell you’re looking at with this “serious” shit. Me and the guys always joke around and play for fun, unless it’s a scrim.
We’re acting like weird and like children since senior year? Dude, you didn’t even know me before senior year.
“And you know I’m right…”
Give me a break, you assume way too much, and you never want to hear when you’re wrong. All I post was how you’ve been acting unlike your normal self lately. Whatever is between you and Alex is that, I’m posting what I think and know is happening.
You act all egotistical and you talk down about things. For example, you say
"you guys have a mascot? thats sad, he should be in the clan if he’s the mascot"
Thats like saying the Phillie fanatic should be on the team to be a mascot. Then you get cheeky and talk about the miniscule mistakes on the new site. All you’re doing is partonizing me, and I will have to assume it’s out of spite. You need to admit when you’re wrong.
Anyone notice how I’m not wrong? Your not a professional organization and the only have a mascot because it used to attract customers in the 70’s and serves no purpose today. There even talking about phasing him out…
Alex, what is your obsession with me hating you. I don’t hate anyone? WTF? People ennoy me but I really don’t care about them…
But your right though, Keith wanted me to hang out with you guys cause he thought I was funny and Felix, Rob Rocky and Chris were all kicked out of school. I didn’t mean you guys as in Tru. I meant as in James, Alex, Gary, etc. Flc existed before 12th grade:bluu: Keep thinking I hate you when I’m the only one of us that hasn’t shown indifference. I’ve never even had an agenda, I was just there to chill with Keith, Jamal, Jarrett, gary, James, etc and you. The drug shit I dealt with in 11th grade, why would you even bring that up when I asked everyone not too…
And you all never have my back. Everytime something goes wrong you turn on me… I said what everyone was thinking a few months ago(well, except Billy and Hyper, they never care) and it all back fired.
Stop it with the PMS, get laid or something. GEt your goddamn eyes off that screen and look at what the fuck is going on.
First off, I used the Fanatic as an analogy. Secondly, we aren’t a professional organization. We have him because it’s fun. Not to be serious, but then again, it seems it could only be valid to you if we were serious, and with that, you are proven a hypocrite. You just now in your past 2 posts raved on about how we’re so serious, and now you post about how in your belief it’s only valid to have a mascot if we were “a professional organization”.
Well, whatever the mascot is or does has nothing to do with you because you are no longer a part of this clan so you should just stop being some kind of critic as if your opinion mattered anymore.
yeah that is so true man.
Asfand I don’t know you, and you dont know me so that does not give you the right to call me names. My friends can call me names cause we joke around with each other, also note that they are my “FRIENDS”
People i knew for a very long time, so we can joke with each other like that.
I have nothing more to say about this, even if you curse or say whatever you wanna say. I just hope god can help you, cause your personallity is horrible, and you need some good character.
I hope you find your real self
"I didn’t mean you guys as in Tru. I meant as in James, Alex, Gary, etc. "
Wtf do I have to do in this? You’re speaking out of spite. I was never in that group so my name shouldn’t even be in there.
“Flc existed before 12th grade Keep thinking I hate you when I’m the only one of us that hasn’t shown indifference.”
It seems you are the only one who hasn’t changed then and you don’t seem to cope well with change. Indifference to what?
“Stop it with the PMS, get laid or something. GEt your goddamn eyes off that screen and look at what the fuck is going on.”
Asfand now you’re pissing me off. If you never talked to me, and if I never told you anything, you would have no idea “what the fuck is going on”. Without me you’d be just like them. Please, don’t try and tell me to get my eyes off the screen, I’m the one that opened yours.