umm yea
Well, Thanks for the criticism…
As in matter of fact, I am still looking for craps that can fix my crappy fiction… so ur suggestion helps. 
Next Chapter will be up on next week… Next Sat to be precise.
I have finals to attend… And I can’t just keep up the craps. :fury:
it better be. prepares blowgun
gulp!!!
changing subject Er… that… Why won’t it snow?? Is it because of El Nino?? :bluu:
flies to the tallgeese 3
powers up to super saiyajin 4
prepares to fire a kamehameha
BRING IT ON!!! :evil: 
prayingGod… Please allow me to have the power to do two things:
Blow g0ku3x to smithreens.
Post the next chapter today.
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
i posted my chapter first:p
Aw~~ shoot!!!
shoots himself in the pinky toe with the the blowgun.
Ah, that’s better…
zzzzzZZZZZzzzz…
Despite the fact that my pinky toe was shot, I am here to post the next chapter. Enjoy.
Chapter 29: The Dark Warrior
All right, it seemed that you are still unable to overcome the fear. A dark figure in the dark room spoke. From the edge of the dark figure, the figure got sharp and short hair. He was sitting in a leather rotating chair.
The other dark figure didnt reply. He was sitting on a stool in front of the first figure.
Both of them were in a dark room, even-though theres a desk lamp turned on behind one of the figure. Both of them were discussing a serious matter, to be more specific, it was about a persons fear.
What kind of fear had this person experienced??
Look, if you keep like this, theres no way that you can face him again. The first figure noted.
I know Thats why I had been seeing you for several times. The second figure replied. From the edge of the figure, there was evidence of a scarf tied around his neck.
Hmm As far as I am concerned, you told me that he destroyed your soul, and it made you feel like you couldnt fight anymore, is that correct? The first figure stood up and walked to the light switch near the door.
Who is he??? And what were they talking about??
Wait!! What are you going to do!? The second figure suddenly felt uncomfortable; with his right hand extended toward the first figure.
Turn on the lights, of course, what else do you expect me to do?? The first figure turned to the second figure.
NO LIGHTS!!! The second figure suddenly screamed.
I must, I am getting uncomfortable with this damn dark room!! The first figure turned on the light.
WAHHH~~~!!! The second figure suddenly crossed his arms in front of his face, like he had seen his worst nightmare and he didnt wish to see it again. In the next second, he stumbled off from the stool, and crawled toward the corner of the white room.
This white room had only two desks, two leather chairs and a stool that once stood in the middle of the room, now fallen. Theres a leather bed covered with white towel at the size of twice the bed.
Apparently, it was a medical room.
Jeez! What the hells wrong with you!? The first figure had light grey hair, along with metal headband tied on his forehead. He was wearing the doctors uniform, along with a name tag on his left chest, with a word Hayato carved on it. His body size was average, comparing with other regular people.
*NO~~~~~!!!* The second figure was revealed to be Strider Hiryu!!
SHUN-GOKU-SATTSU!!! The voice came from nowhere, and suddenly, the room went completely white.
**NO~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!** Strider yelled to top of his voice, with both of his hands scratching his head, and his feet pounding on the floor, struggling to dig a hole on the ground, and tried to seek for a way to get out from the upcoming hell!!!
Inside Striders eyes, what he could see was:
*Balrog, Vega, and Saget were co-operating with each other and tried to stop the invader who made a vast amount of damage on the three fighters already. What were left over for the three fighters were their seriously wounded bodies.
Vega was just barely standing, with Balrog lying on the ground unconscious. The only fighter who still has little energy left to fight was Saget. But the three fighters were about to meet their fate.
The invader shouted something that all people around him were shocked to death.
SHUN-GOKU-SATTSU!! The invader screamed as his right hand held Sagets head, along with his left hand caught Vegas chest. Beside the invader was lying the badly injured Barlog.
Then everything went white*
NO~NO
The view of Shun-Goku-Sattsu was still fresh to his memory, even though it happened more than a year ago since the invaders incident.
Aw Jeez! Hayato grumbled as he shook Strider hardly in attempting to wake him up from the nightmare.
No more light!! NO MORE LIGHT!!! Strider continued his yelling; as if the nightmare had been repeated over and over again.
Wake the fuck up!!! Strider!! Theres no fucking invader around here, theres only one fucking person in front of you!! And that is Hayato!! WAKE THE FUCK UP!! Hayato continued his shaking. It seemed both Strider and Hayato were struggling to find a solution in overcoming Striders fear for light.
NO MORE LIGHT!!! It seemed that Strider wasnt listening to Hayatos response at all either!
Fuck! Hayato spat out as he took a metal stick about a feet long from his desk, and knocked Strider unconscious.
Sigh I think I have to start teaching him that now Hayato mumbled as he lifted Strider onto the bed.
Several hours later.
Ugh Where am I? Strider finally opened his eyes.
In the sunlight, dummy. It was a reply he heard right after he spoke. It was Hayato, who was sitting on a tree beside Strider.
Lights!? No! Strider again shrieked to the top of his voice, and it wasnt what Hayato had wished for.
Oh, just shut your fuckin mouth, does that light hurt you?? Are you a vampire?! Hayato slapped across Striders face.
Strider finally stopped screaming, he then stood up from the ground.
What are you going to do? Strider finally asked as he looked around the place they were at.
Their present location was a forest, near a city.
The trees were huge; and strangely, there were vines wrapped around some of the trees there. On the ground were many fallen leaves with different sizes. It was more like a rainforest. But, theres no such rainforest in China.
This is an abnormal forest!! But what can this abnormal forest do to both Hayato and Strider??
to be continued.
Chapter 29: The Dark Warrior continued…
Watch me. Hayato wasnt wearing his doctors uniform; he was wearing golden belt, and dark blue tight suit, and pants instead. On his right hand, he was holding the metal stick that he used to knock Strider unconscious.
Dont move a muscle. If you do move, you will die. Hayato commanded as he turned the switch on the metal stick. Just then, a blue light beam popped out from the metal stick.
It was a blue saber!!
What was Hayato planning to do??
Wait a min Strider tried to find out what exactly had happened; but it was too late for him to call a halt against Hayato, who had already started the procedure.
Everything went completely dark right after Strider finished the three words; it was so dark that he couldnt see whats right in front of him, worst of all, he couldnt even move himself either!!
But it didnt matter anyways, Hayato did warned him not to move a muscle. All he had to do was wait until everything went back to normal.
But, it will take a long while.
Ichi!! Ni!! San!! Yon!! Go!! Ruku!! Nana!! Hachi!! Kiyuu!! Jiyuu!! Jiyuu-ichi!! Jiyuu-ni!! Jiyuu-San!! These were the last voice Strider heard before he was knocked unconscious again.
But what did these things mean??
Strider was stuck in the darkness, and now, he was knocked unconscious, which meant that hes still stuck in the darkness. How would Strider overcome this kind of fear? The fear of death?
Stuck in the pure darkness, even though you move, you struggle; all you gain was only darkness, and how does that feel? Its the terror of death!!!
It was what Strider was experiencing now. If he can overcome this kind of fear, then he should be able to overcome the fear of Shun-Goku-Sattsu.
Several hours later
It was already next morning when Strider woke up.
Ugh Strider spoke, from being knocked unconscious twice.
As Strider opened his eyes, the first thing that he saw was the sunlight, which was a bit dimmed by the leaves cover of this forest. Other than that, the sunlight was pure, warm, and bright.
This time, Strider didnt try to avoid the sunlight, but he was rather like the scenery that shone onto his eyes.
Feeling better? Hayato was sitting on another tree, with his arms folded, and eyes closed.
What did you do to me? I was like fallen to the valley of death It was the question that crossed his mind.
What?
Er What is that sound I heard when the whole thing went black?? Strider tried to make the whole segment clear.
Oh, that? They are just numbers. The sound you heard was ichi, ni, san, yon, go, ruku, nana, hachi, kiyuu, jiyuu, jiyuu-chi, jiyuu-ni, and jiyuu-san.
What the hell do they mean anyways?? Strider still didnt get it.
They are the numbers, to be clear, the sounds were actually intended to be one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten, eleven, twelve, and thirteen. Hayato replied with ease.
Why thirteen? Strider seemed that he had difficulty in understanding what these numbers meant.
All right, listen carefully, if you actually master this kind of move, you would probably have the power that surpasses the power of Shun-Goku-Sattsu!! Hayato continued. There, to attack, there are thirteen different locations to attack from. This technique is merely an attack that strikes all thirteen positions at the same time!!
Now its interesting. Attack thirteen places at the same time, it require high speed and flexibility.
The thirteen positions are: the forehead, left shoulder, left arm elbow, left waist, the bottom, right waist, right arm elbow, right shoulder, the neck, the heart, the stomach, left chest, and right chest.
The technique Hayato performed, was a super move that attacks all thirteen positions at the exactly the same time. This way, it would be almost impossible to defend all thirteen attacks at the same time, and hence inflicting the damage on the opponent.
In addition, before the attack launches, it was where the key lies. The victimizer needs to use the ki to temporary paralyze the opponent. The stronger the ki level is, the higher chance that the opponent will get paralyzed. Under paralyze status, all the opponent could see was the pure darkness, since he couldnt do anything at all.
In addition, the thirteen positions would not only greatly damage the opponent, but also has the chance to take away the opponents life!!!
The forehead is where the brain is, with the saber, it already has the power to blow the opponents brain apart!!
Left shoulder and right shoulder is the joint of the hand and the body, if destroyed, the hands cannot function anymore.
Left arm elbow and right arm elbow are the joint of the hand to the arm, if destroyed, the hand cannot be repaired, even with the present technology.
Left waist and right waist are the place where the tem of pain affects the body the most. If the target were hit, the victim would think nothing but the pain.
The Bottom is the place that most people fear the most.
The neck, if the neck is destroyed, the head and the body would be torn apart.
The heart, need I say more about it?
The stomach, same as the heart, both are the most important organ in the human body!
Left chest and Right chest are the position of the lungs, if the targets were hit, then it would be difficult for the subject to breath, even with superior armor.
This move, is called the Dark Hayato!!!
Now get it? Hayato finished.
Dark HayatoStrider muttered. All right, I would like to master this move too!!
Hmm Hayato gave a satisfied smirk and sighed in relief.
to be continued
i was starting to wonder if hayato was going to be in this story. very nice. but i mean get back to the shotos fighting each other.
Well, actually, I didn’t intend to put him in the ficiton… But due the plot conflict and the “specific problem”, so I added him.
Oh, by the way, Don’t kill me when you hear this.
Shoto fight won’t come up until 5 chapters later.
ok will do.
readies to attack tallgesee3:evil:
Huh!? What happened to that “don’t”!?
Okay, if you say so, Here’s the news: The shoto fight won’t come up until about 20 chapters later. :evil:
there was a don’t? sorry i didn’t see it.
wtf? :wtf:
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Ha… Ha… Ha… Ha… !#%!^!@$~#^!$ :fury:
Anyways, You are expected to see the next chapter tonight or tomorrow night.
Chapter 30: The Blue Clash
Magneto and Akuma now stood to each other, face to face, at the distance of approximately ten meters apart.
Both their eyes were focused, and determined.
But there was a question, was he really Akuma??
The person who helped both Storm and Rogue, and also the person with bad sense of humor; in addition, he talked way too much, considering Akumas personality.
Normally, Akuma didnt talk much, and he would rather not help other people. Most importantly, he considered himself as the Master of the Fists.
But, standing in front of Magneto has red burning hair, stiff body, purple gi, and the typical giant beads around his neck. Most importantly, he would also have a character Unlimited on his back If he wasnt Akuma, who was he??
Unfortunately, no body in this battlefield knows who Akuma was. As in matter of fact, both Magneto and Cyclops didnt even know what was Shoto was all about either!
All they knew about Akuma was the fact that Akuma was only a stranger!!! They didnt even know what the character on his back was, and his clothing was all about either!!
Perhaps the answer will show up when both Akuma and Magneto fight!
Akuma suddenly made a quick swift toward Magneto without warning; as if he wanted to destroy Magneto in order to gain the revenge for the destroyed base!
In response, Magneto dashed right toward Akuma in his maximum speed!
Akuma suddenly hollered as he summoned his blue ki to his left hand; just then, it was almost like himself was actually a blue candle fire!!!
With his glowing and floating red hair; his glowing red fireball shaped eyes; and the blue smoke that kept flowing out from his body, as if Akuma was implying that himself was a burning fire, and anything that got into his path, will be burnt down!!
Right after Akuma finished hollering, his body was actually becoming black, as if himself was a black, dark light bulb with blue smoke flowing out from the skin!!!
It was one of his deadly attacks: Messatsu Gou Shoryu!!!
From the look of this kind of hyper combo, it would take away anybodys life who were right in front of him; and that person was Magneto!!
It was like Akuma had sworn to god that he would take away Magnetos life right now, and right outside the X-Mens base; and especially right in front of Cyclops!!!
But Messatsu Gou Shoryu missed Magneto terribly!!! How!?
Akuma always had no problem in hitting the target with Messatsu Gou Shoryu, but this time, he had not only missed the target terribly, but also left a giant space for Magneto to counter his attack!!!
In the next second, Magneto summoned his ki onto his chest, and fired out a projectile that kept floating toward Akuma!!
In this situation, Magneto should counter the attack with all his might to kill the opponent, but he didnt.
Instead, he only fired out a projectile! Had Magneto gone bonkers??
The answer was a no.
That move! Cyclops, who recognized this projectile, suddenly exclaimed; however, he remained silent right after he made his comment.
Why?
Cyclops still didnt trust Akuma, who took side with the X-Men. What was Akumas real purpose in helping the X-Men??
In addition, did Akuma actually know who the X-Men are?? And did Akuma know about Magnetos plan??
In the battlefield, Akuma recognized this attack at once, and tried to pull back his attack, and turn to his defense position!!
It was too late for Akuma; his Shoryuken was too powerful that caught him off balance!!
How would Akuma recognize this move!? Akuma didnt even know who X-Men were!! If he didnt know, then how would he know the attack and moves the X-Men possesses?
Ugh! Akuma grunted as he managed to turn his body around to face Magneto; but all were too late.
The projectile touched Akumas feet; just then, Akumas whole body were paralyzed!!!
In the next second, the projectile altered its shape and wrapped around Akumas body like itself was a stiff chain rope that tied around Akuma!!!
Ugh!!! Akuma grunted again, as he tried to set himself free from this trap. However, this trap not only captured Akumas body, but also temporary paralyzed Akuma!!!
Grasping Akumas paralyzed body, the projectile then brought the target right at where Magneto wanted him!!!
DIE!!! Magneto screamed as he launched one of his hyper combos: Magnetic Tempest!!!
In Cyclops eyes, he could only see millions of stones that came from nowhere popped out from Magnetos hands, and suddenly all of them flew right toward Akuma!!!
It was a hell for Akuma, who had absorbed up to millions of stone hits throughout his whole body!!
Ugh!!! Akuma spat out blood from his mouth before he was sent flying away from Magneto!!
But Magneto wasnt finished here; he again dashed toward Akumas wounded body, and again caught him with his right hand on Akumas neck!!!
Now, Akumas body was suspended on the air by Magnetos right hand!!
Ugh Ugh Akuma groaned, both of his hands were trying to remove Magnetos hard grasp on his neck. Nevertheless, the more he struggled, the tighter the grasp!!
Ugh Let me go!!! Let me go!!! Dont you know that you must go soft on the w Akuma grunted as his last attempt to set himself free from the death grip!!
But why didnt Akuma say the last word? And what was that last word???
The last word started with w, and why did Akuma say go soft on the w??
What was Akuma trying to say??
to be continued…
Chapter 30: Blue Clash continued…
Go soft on you? In your dreams!! in response, Magneto threw Akuma up toward the sky; then with the blue ki summoned onto his left hand; he was preparing to start his second wave of attacks!!
In the next second, Magneto hollered as his left hand punched onto the ground!!
This impact not only created a giant crate on the ground; but also made a massive explosion right at where Magneto stood!!!
Simultaneously; a beam of blue energy suddenly popped out from the ground right below where Akuma was at!! This beam made a gigantic impact onto Akumas already wounded body!!!
Later on, this beam forced Akuma even farther away from the ground; as if Akuma had been knocked by a cannonball!!!
Magneto hollered again as he gave another hard punch onto the ground once again!!
In the next second; another blue beam of pure energy popped out again; and hit the target once again!!!
The process had repeated for ten times before Magneto finally let go of the prey!! This combo was named as Magnetic Shockwave!!!
What had happened to Akuma this time?
He fainted. His body had almost torn into multiple pieces!!!
There came a loud thud as Akumas injured body hit the ground. Since then, there had been no movement of the victim.
As for Magneto, he was also badly injured as well; his gigantic attacks also drained almost all his energy in his body; but also temporary injured himself! Especially his left hand, which had been suffering huge impacts on the ground for several times!!
Due to the injury; Magneto fell onto his right knee, and panted hard. His breath was very labored that the sound of breath could be heard in Cyclopss ears!
You!! You destroyed my base!!! Cyclops screamed as he realized that Magneto had beaten Akuma!!
Just then, Cyclops dashed toward Magneto to fulfill the revenge for both the base, and the so-called helper, Akuma!
MEGA-OPTIC BLAST!!! Cyclops roared as he turned on his Quartz glass up to the maximum!!
With his anger that he had contained for the last several minutes to watch the fight of the two Blue-ki fighters killing each other, Cyclops finally let burst out all his energy and his anger onto Magneto!!!
This Mega Optic Beam was so powerful that even Magneto knew that he couldnt block it easily, despite the fact that Cyclops still had only Orange-Ki!!!
Oh god Is it really the end for me?? Magneto muttered as he watched the beam drawing closer to him helplessly!!
But something stopped the Mega Optic Beam from damaging Magneto!!!
It was a beam of blue pure energy that deflected all the Optic energy to other places!!! Who did that??
Surprisingly, it was Akuma!!! And that blue pure energy was Messatsu Gou Hadou!!!
Standing behind Magneto, was Akuma!!
But Akuma seemed to be very tired from the fight… Why???
You fucker!!! Why did you help that villain!? Cyclops screamed as he found out that it was Akuma who saved Magnetos ass!!
He Is Mine!! Akuma muttered as he was standing in behind Magneto; with both of his hands extended as the pose of firing a projectile.
Akumas breath was still labored; and in this labored breathing hid somewhat horrific voice tone!! Was Akuma really a human?? Nearly nobody could survive Magnetos Magnetic Shockwave!!
But someone did survive, and he was Akuma!! Akuma was the first one to survive this kind of fierce attack!!!
Grr Magneto grumbled as he figured out that it was Akuma, who saved his ass from Cyclopss Mega Optic Beam!
Ready For Round Two? Akuma spoke coldly; his eyes were darting onto Magnetos eyes. His wounded body was still trying to recover from the pain!! But Akuma didnt care about the pain on his body!
Round two As you wish Magneto replied coldly as well. He finally stood up from half kneeling posture. But I think It will only take two minutes to finish the fight
No Ten Seconds Is Enough Akuma replied. His red burning eyes were still focused on Magneto.
Ten seconds!? Was Akuma joking?? In the first round, Akuma had lost the fierce battle against Magneto, and now Akuma predicted his win!?
Pretty confident huh? Magneto replied coldly in response.
This sentence could probably the last sentence he ever spoke in his lifetime; because Akuma launched his attack without warning at all!!
Shun Goku Sattsu!!! Akuma yelled as he lifted his left feet; with both of his hands prepared to catch the target!!
Akuma himself became a dark light bulb as his body emitted the dark light along with blue smoke that kept flowing out from his body!!!
The only visible thing on his body was only his red burning eyes; that had almost scared everyone in front of him!!!
In the next second; Akumas body was floating toward Magneto, who couldnt do a thing to prevent this kind of attack!! As in matter of fact, Magneto didnt know what Shun Goku Sattsu is!!!
Before Akuma could actually reach Magneto; Akuma suddenly spat out blood from his mouth, his scars, and his cuts on his body!!
But Akuma didnt care about it; he cared only to exterminate the opponent!!
Just then; everything went white
The only things that could be heard were only the sounds of hitting, impacts, and the scream of the victim!!!
Would Akuma actually finish Magneto off within only ten seconds!?
to be continued
Happy New Year, and there’s a thing for certain: No new chapter until next year!!!
Happy New Year!!
run off before anyone recognizes what exactly had happened.
intercepts milliardo
powers up
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